Life is Cruel

Life is Cruel

A Poem by Hunter C. Brown

Life is Cruel,
Or it feels that way.
It gives you something good,
Something Great.
But there's a catch,
There's always a catch.
Even the best things,
Can end.
And they will,
Life is Cruel,
Or it feels that way.
If it isn't to you,
Be happy.
But if it is,
Good luck to all of you,
Because Life is Cruel.

© 2011 Hunter C. Brown


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there's a saying, you know..."life's a b***h and then you die" (i suppose i don't know you well enough to use coarse language...sorry). it does make one wonder though...why do we (human beings) go through so much punishment through out life just to continue to the next day for a little bit more punishment! life is very cruel and seems to get crueler everyday but not near cruel enough to throw away....the chief aspiration of every being is to live...but life is cruel...sorry. i'm kinda rambling now....anyway...great write

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It's all about perspective-that's true-guess if life was not cruel then we would not appreciate it as much or mourn when someone we love dies.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Every life is cruel to a point. You just have to decide where that point is for you then change it...maybe it gets worse so you change it again...but life is a b----, wont get you into heaven, as they say. But the catch, is to know where it is and when it has passed you by. Lost silences is how I describe them. You can get alot said in such a short poem. Envy, envy... Very nice =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Loved it! I hate the saying: Life isn't fair. Good job! A really interesting poem! Keep on writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there's a saying, you know..."life's a b***h and then you die" (i suppose i don't know you well enough to use coarse language...sorry). it does make one wonder though...why do we (human beings) go through so much punishment through out life just to continue to the next day for a little bit more punishment! life is very cruel and seems to get crueler everyday but not near cruel enough to throw away....the chief aspiration of every being is to live...but life is cruel...sorry. i'm kinda rambling now....anyway...great write

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Posted 10 Years Ago


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A true, yet very beautiful poem. Although life can be very cruel, it can also be good. And you should always focus on the good things. Very relatable. Well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Who said life was easy? So true.. life can be cruel sometimes, sometimes it can be fun.. but im not goign thru a fun time at the momet.. good, I can relate to this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Yeah, life is cruel.
Good luck to you, too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Short and sweet and the meaning straight and true. Good work =)


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Yes it is! Life isn't fair, it's just fairer than death. It seems even the good things in life are just a set up to make the fall harder, to makes the bad seem worse. Good expression here. I like the use of the word cruel; seems fitting.

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Hunter C. Brown
Hunter C. Brown

Reno, NV



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