Emptiness

Emptiness,

People say that's it's nothing.

But really,

It's a living, breathing creature.

Eating away at your life,

Your soul.

You have to fill it,

But you don't know how.

Some do it with food,

Others with objects.

All they are really doing is deepening the pit,

No way out,

Only sorrow.

Author's Note

i had writer's block before writing this but BrynnaW. came up with this idea so i used it. thanks brynna!!!

Reviews

[Steph K]

Simple at its best! Well written =)

[Tasha]

Wow, this was really good. You came out of writer's block well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Shy Girl]

Wish I could come out of a writers block that well...but we all have our strengths right? This was a beautiful, small piece. It has you wondering just what is really going on. Very nice piece... :P

[BrynnaW.]

A very good poem! I really liked it! No problem :) I like how different your poem is! I really enjoyed reading it so keep on writing!!! :)

[TheElfPrincess]

Wow, a really good poem! I really liked it a lot. Well written.