Remember Me

Sunny days, it never rained,

Much too young to know the pain.

Our wild minds could not be tamed,

We were one, we were the same.

But we grew up,

We grew apart,

She took my place

Inside your heart,

But part of me will always belong to you.

You were my first but not the last,

Now a memory, just the past.

Do you still know who I am now? Do you?

Spending summer

On that hill,

Running down 

Just for the thrill,

I can't forget, those days belong to you.

Golden leaves fell from the trees,

We went home with scraped knees,

But it was okay, I'd see you again, the next day.

I waited for you

Right outside,

We said goodbye

Tears in my eyes,

The final school bell, I never saw you again.

Do you still remember me?

We grew up,

We grew apart,

But you're still here,

Inside my heart.

One thing's for sure, I'll never forget you.

I hope you remember me.

Author's Note

Another song. The last one, I promise.
Thankyou for reading it (: ♥

Reviews

[Brad]

would love to hear the music that goes with this

[M.Babu]

you always have hard hitting lines!...
'Our wild minds could not be tamed,
We were one, we were the same.' awesome line right here.

'But we grew up,
We grew apart,
She took my place
Inside your heart,'
Amazing rhyme and flow to this part. Very good emotion conveyed too:)

"I waited for you
Right outside,
We said goodbye
Tears in my eyes,"
This is just great Scooby:)

It doesn't matter if it was a song it also does extremely well as a poem. or floetry. What a wonderful story told of youngsters and memories immortalized forever. This had a good structure too, few bumps along the way but great story told. Very nostalgic to this piece btw

Excellent.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

aww i remember you showing my this in Sid in English xx

[Sofea]

This is sooooo beautiful :') Awww.

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Love this song!!!

[trainwreck]

This was an amazing song! great job.

[Ravyne Hawke]

excellent write.. love the beat of the poem, the images conveyed.. great work as a song.. I can hear the words being sung in my head.. of course to heavy metal, but I doubt that is your intentions *laughs*.

[?]

The is great, loved the flow, ummmmmm I am humming the tune now.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is great. the words flow together perfectly. favorite line was:
"Golden leaves fell from the trees,
We went home with scraped knees,
But it was okay, I'd see you again, the next day."
i loved it :) keep writing. 100/100