A Treasure..

A Treasure..

A Poem by Sindu
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Found my first poem from 8 years ago.. :D

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Little things, little ways;
bring colour to this
black and white haze.

Dusting, sorting through my room
knick knacks strewn across ungroomed;
Fishing through my old stuff
brought memories spurting from past.

A treasured watch, a cute chain,
little drawings and everything archane.
There, hidden among some sheets
I found my treasured first piece!

First attempt at poetry,
begun well before all this;
knew not of words big and pretty
or how to spin a mysterious story.

But as I held my amateur read;
flooding emotions made me freeze!
Filled me with joy and hope anew,
Some cleaning could do this, who knew!!

© 2014 Sindu


Author's Note

Sindu
Everything's pretty much said :D This happened two days ago. I thought I started writing four months ago ;)

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Always fun to discover the things we wrote way back when. It amazes me the things I wrote when I was a kid. I was one sick twisted little bugger! This was a great, light, upbeat little number. Really brings a smile. It might even be a motivator to some people to clean more often...me on the other hand...am still way too lazy :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sindu

9 Years Ago

Thanks :D! I'd say your crazy even now :P
Wow. I clean my room in a long while and now I'm mo.. read more
Briana O'Connor

9 Years Ago

Glad I could make you smile lol :D My craziness has that affect on people :P



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JC
I always end up getting stuck for hours and hours whenever I go through my things, memory after memory... this brought me back to my own past, thanks for that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sindu

9 Years Ago

Thank you too Jason! Its amazing what old stuff can do, huh! :)
Happy to know this brought bac.. read more
Pretty good, nothing too fishy or too long

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sindu

9 Years Ago

Hey! Thanks a lot for taking time to check this out :D ( I think it's long enough.. haha.. have to t.. read more
that's a sweet poem from your past, good to see you revive it here, a joy to read thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


R Smith

9 Years Ago

oh right must have got confused sorry :)
Sindu

9 Years Ago

Not a prob.. wondering if I should share it.. it isn't so great hehe
R Smith

9 Years Ago

I bet its good :)
Always fun to discover the things we wrote way back when. It amazes me the things I wrote when I was a kid. I was one sick twisted little bugger! This was a great, light, upbeat little number. Really brings a smile. It might even be a motivator to some people to clean more often...me on the other hand...am still way too lazy :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sindu

9 Years Ago

Thanks :D! I'd say your crazy even now :P
Wow. I clean my room in a long while and now I'm mo.. read more
Briana O'Connor

9 Years Ago

Glad I could make you smile lol :D My craziness has that affect on people :P
The littlest things can inspire… and even our earliest fledgling words set down can still hold tremendous power. Great poem perfectly capturing the joy of that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sindu

9 Years Ago

Thank you Momzi!
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
enjoyed your new poem. and you are absolutely right, of course. even the smallest of things can bring us a lot of joy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sindu

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I know, right! :D We forget that in everyday rush..

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Added on October 6, 2014
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Sindu
Sindu

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