Dear Father

Dear Father

A Poem by Nicholas Hagenschneider

My wings failed me long ago

and ever since i’ve spiraled downwards

i tried to move with your flow

but it was your words i could not hear

you cast me out

just for loving you

it’s them i doubt

it’s them that’s untrue

cast me down

break me

but as i drown

i’ll disagree

with your decision

your choice

your vision

and your voice

© 2013 Nicholas Hagenschneider


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The word to describe this is heartbreaking a father abandoning his son when the son only wanted love the father in my perspective will later on regret letting his son fall amazing structure and writing skills

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kamari's

5 Years Ago

You are welcome I can't wait to read what else you have
Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

A lot of people don't realize this poem/lyric was written through the perspective of Lucifer.
Kamari's

5 Years Ago

I can see that yet it made more sense as a child trying to love his father when lucifer tried to tak.. read more
Yes, I have to agree with Sami... this is a great poem. The last five lines really made me feel the indignation of the piece. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you :) I appreciate it.
I like this write ALOT...THANK YOU FOR POSTING...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

6 Years Ago

Haha Anytime :) Thanks!
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on May 23, 2013
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Nicholas Hagenschneider
Nicholas Hagenschneider

Middletown, OH



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