Red

Red

A Poem by Nicholas Hagenschneider

Confusion
stumbles along
unwelcome.
My heart skips
twisting suddenly.
My stomach growls
A caged beast within
Stirring storms
And leaving me red.
Impulsive
My touch becomes
destructive
My voice a boom
of thunder.
My chest heaves
Like waves
crashing against
the cliff side.
Intense winds
attempting to
calm the storm.
I am left with shame
a dew upon my shoulders
An ever present regret
An ever present reminder.
My throat tightens
the last of the rain
forming in my eyes.
I wish to forget you

I will never forget you.

© 2014 Nicholas Hagenschneider


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Heartbreakingly beautiful

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
nicely penned my friend.I enjoyed it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
I have to honestly say this is a great poem man! Nice job! The last four lines are killer

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
This a cute poem, very creative. Nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Blackstar

5 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
Cute little story I can tell there is anger nicely done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Rage, and then regret. Something beautiful, torn to pieces, and then you wish with all your heart that you could put it back together again.
Well penned. ^^

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicholas Hagenschneider

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem. ^^

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Added on May 21, 2014
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Tags: red, anger, regret, sadness, storm, destruction, waves, wind, poem, lyrics, words, deep

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Nicholas Hagenschneider
Nicholas Hagenschneider

Middletown, OH



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