Cosmic Romantics

I want to show you the stars.

Get you the sweetest chocolate from the planet Mars.

Have dinner with you on the moon.

Capture all of the gases from the entire universe and compose them into the most intoxicating and orgasmic fragrance perfume.

Enter the galactic.

Let’s wed on Venus __ I’ll give you all of Saturns rings.

Pick you the finest lilies off of Jupiter.

I want to show you the cosmos.

Fall into my arms and enter my heart like a black hole.

Let’s get lost in us.

Drifting, intertwining, and spiraling as the Milky Way.

Where are we going?

You and I weren't perfect creatures___ that’s why we ended up on earth,

But do know that I go beyond the five senses when I speak on your gorgeous features.

Reviews

[Rei Ta]

Wow!!! Love it!! Filled with love and passion expressed in the most sensational way. My mind just wonders off into a world of it's own when I read line by line. This is just wow..and if a world like that existed I want that intoxicating orgasmic fragrance perfume!!! lol

[sinNsincerity]

It exist in my mind hehe
It really makes me smile to hear that it did take you away while you were reading.
It means so much when I get some feed back such as yours.
Thank you Loretta!

[Rei Ta]

You're welcome! :)

[Carrie.]

Passionate and witty. Not perfect creatures, indeed. But, if I've learned anything with my ongoing love affair with Science Fiction, there aren't any perfect beings out there either.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Carrie!

[Jen]

I LOVE THIS! The flow is perfect with the catching of rhyme as the read flow down through the stanzas. Wonder piece!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Jen!
I'm so glad you loved it.

[613]

This was beautiful in nearly every way.

- Brittney

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Brittney.

[613]

You're welcome!
Just letting you know - my entire manuscript, HIM, has been uploaded to my profile. Checking it out would really help me to improve my story. (Can't move forward if there isn't anyone to help!) I'd greatly appreciate it! (:

[TheOne&Only]

Loved it!! It makes me all "giddy" inside. ...Lol

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you hon.

[JayceeC]

Sin this wS truly a very creative poem with great metaphors from space u til the last lines. Those felt ike you didn't know how to end and still get the message across. It felt rather du aftsr the glittering ride you gave us in the rest of the poem.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jan.

[Einahpets2012]

Mind blown. I love it. My life is complete because of this poem! lol

[sinNsincerity]

No way!
That made my day and i just got gum all over my shoelace at school hahaha
So this makes me smile so hard after thinking I waving a bad day.

[Einahpets2012]

Awe :) glade I could make you smile

[Nia Lisa]

This line of yours was both my favourite and "a wait a second", haha I loved your poem. But think of actually taking all the gases from the universe? Wouldn't that smell terrible? :P

[sinNsincerity]

Thank so much for reading!

[sereenaoutloud]

NICE, romantic , fun and creative. Triple threat my friend lol you are good. This made me smile, one of my favourites that i have read of yours (so far anyway still reading!)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you! I'm glad it put a smile on you face =D

[Jamestown]

She is seriously cool as all heck, love her!

[sereenaoutloud]

AWE ..me blushing and honored James....you one super cool dude and I'm sharing the love right back my friend!

[ANTO]

I like the playfulness of this. Its rather old fashioned in its wording which I love. "Lets get lost in us" - that is a great romantic phrase and the Milky Way imagery and analogy is very cool, Sin, very cool indeed. Theres a sincerity in among the playfulness especially in the penultimate line. And we return to the romanticizing of the subject at the very end with a big old sigh.
I enjoyed this one dear poet. Thank you for sharing. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Anto! I appreciate your insight and I'm glad that you enjoyed it!