You Took the time

You Took the time

A Poem by sinNsincerity

You took the time to notice me and say hi,

And that brightens my day!

May it be that I was inside of your brain for at least a second this day?

If nothing at all, that still has to mean something…

If lightning strikes this place today again, then maybe I’ll be able to catch some sleep and dream.

Wake up!

Surely when we speak my soul is free from all of the madness that is presented to me.

Whisking along with the fallen leaves that never get to view spring.

I’m a fallen angel trying to give you all of my angles, while I search for a way out of the Bermuda Triangle.

Oh my, I’m just trying to make it back to the heavenly, but how can I when my heart has left me and remains with thee?

My whispers buzz in your ears like a bee, so please don’t swipe them away to not be comprehended when coming to the realization of the days when we can no longer be.

Can you find a way to keep me in your stare my dear?

Do you care that when I close my eyes you are still there?

Do you care that you are the one that holds all of my care?

For I care not for me, but I care too much about you.

My heart is bear,

Naked!

Open!

Is it fair to say that it’s not fair that your heart isn’t mine to wear?

These are the thoughts and the dilemma that haunt my mind.

Is it insanity or pure genius?

Is it clever or just whatever?

I’m cold and there’s no sweater that can comfort me in this lonesome dreadful weather.

A butterfly to a caterpillar…
A rare kind to never be seen, even if I waited ‘till forever...

If I only knew, knew that a kiss would never exist beyond an instant of daydreaming.

For you are the voice that seduces my mind when I’m alone.

I think about you just to pass the time…


© 2015 sinNsincerity


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omg ....
sometime we dont listen to the things that are being said, sometimes we forget who we really really are , sometimes without us knowing we can push our love away , I know the feeling cause i once felt it so hard ,no push was needed i ran from love that day. Our , thoughts are treasures ,minds are sacred grounds ,labryinths for the insane , to pass the time,to fill your day , in a prison id think youd lay ,maybe your own, maybe from love , maybe god sent you from upabove??
love the details that you have in almost everything you write , and though its felt as i have told you many times before its like you are in my head messing with my thoughts i see the pieces sometimes for more but i can relate to everyone , and as usual it was immediate ,,,,, the .....
attraction that is :]

Posted 4 Years Ago


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omg ....
sometime we dont listen to the things that are being said, sometimes we forget who we really really are , sometimes without us knowing we can push our love away , I know the feeling cause i once felt it so hard ,no push was needed i ran from love that day. Our , thoughts are treasures ,minds are sacred grounds ,labryinths for the insane , to pass the time,to fill your day , in a prison id think youd lay ,maybe your own, maybe from love , maybe god sent you from upabove??
love the details that you have in almost everything you write , and though its felt as i have told you many times before its like you are in my head messing with my thoughts i see the pieces sometimes for more but i can relate to everyone , and as usual it was immediate ,,,,, the .....
attraction that is :]

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May it be that I was inside of your brain for at least a second this day?
for me the above line carries the whole poem...so much longing and dreaming in one line that then threads through the rest of your word tapestry...well penned..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for thinking so!
When we love someone so much, even just a simple hello from their part makes our heart flip-flop (though to them, unless they have mutual feelings for us, it is nothing, really). I get it, I feel you. I remember daydreaming all day and night about my crushes.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

It is the simple and little things that I have come to love.
Thank you Nadia!
There are so many excellent lines in this that made me go 'note that one, note that one,etc' and I would have ended up quoteing 75% of it so I'll just say that this is very impressive Sin.
Well penned my friend.
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Wow, Thank you Anto!
i really like how you make the reader not just read the words, but FEEL them too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

I try, thank you Alaska!
Some beautiful thoughts collected and put to words. With nice metaphors and imagery, this piece is creative. Vibes of sorrow, love and wavering hope bubble throughout it, great work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to hear from you!
Beautiful piece about love feelings right from the heart. Well done. :) Rudi

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi!
nicely written,, love this piece

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

I'm glad you did. Thank you!
I just the what the poem is about!
Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
I love this so much, Sin...To feel this way about someone and be able to write it is amazing. It's so expressive and emotionally genuine and absolutely torturous to not be heard or felt by the other person. I felt that imensley. Great job my friend...:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Hehe =D Thank you so much! You're right about that.

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