There is no Perfect One

There is no perfect one.

To justify myself makes me a liar!

Although it sounds wonderfully good to do so,

I remain vain with the good wisdom in my brain.

In the strangest of places is where I see beyond the faces.

But they don’t know who I am...

My greatest fear is that they don't put flesh and blood to my name.

This has me so far removed.

Things are recorded with extra reality.

Paint the picture...

If I live like them,

They’ll accept me.

Most live like this

Except for me.

Remaining Strangely!

It's so simple.

You go beyond me just to grow claim to power!

You’re establishing something factual,

Specific,

And regarding a promise...

Seeing yourself in some dimension other than this reality frightens you,

So you’re confined to the five senses.

Do you know who you are?

How does this apply to you today?

This chapter stands alone.

It’s something intangible to hold onto!

Not willing to acknowledge our own sins,

So we place others in front of the sun before ourselves

To hide from ourselves.

Loving the unlovable.

I’m loving to see you love!

Put flesh and blood to that!

It’s all too good,

All too important!

Think so you can thought.

If you think thought before it is done,

Then it is already done!

How deep in the mud did you travel before you got stuck?

Eyes covered in muck.

Tongue getting use to the taste of disgust!

What did it feel like?

I welcome all people into my life.

Especially the type that feel like they don't fjt in,

So they feel ovt of place and just want to kill

Instead of giving a shout

All just because they really needed a hug.

Come in!

This is the reality of life.

The greater the life,

The greater the challenge,

Comes with the greatest temptation

And then comes the greatest fall.

What remains?

An abundance of love

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

This is a wonderful poem with very strong message, it's in human nature to get others to like us and sometimes for this purpose we do something which we would haven't done otherwise. Next thing we are acting totally different from our true behaviour just to be part of a group which we don't need to.
Amazing work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[B]

Sounds like rap to me
Interesting

[Sesame]

Hello,

getting use -> getting used

And are you changing focus from "I" and "me" to "you" and "it" on purpose?

Regards, Sesame.

[ObSeRvEd]

i love this poem and the truth behind :) Great writing.. Keep it up

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Gabby Nieves]

preach it ...............................................................................................................

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Gabby!

[Calliope]

"Not willing to acknowledge our own sins/So we place others in front of the sun before ourselves/To hide from ourselves." An interesting message, and an even more interesting take on morality and life in general. Lovely poem!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Calliop! I'm glad that you see it that way!

[Jesse]

Another very nice write. Strong beginning and then it accentuates that through out. nice!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sir!

[Ana B.]

I could relate right away...its like my own sunconciousness mocking me....a very deep meaning behind this. A gorgeous write SiS :)

[sinNsincerity]

That is really cool Ana! That makes me smile hard!

[JayceeC]

I love this open, caring side of your personality. The one that looks beyond your own life and reaches out to others in the best demonstration of living your faith. Keep it up. Those stragglers need a champion that sees past the facade to give hugs to heal their hurts.

[sinNsincerity]

Um, but you see, I'm a straggler myself...and that is what humbles me and allows me to reach out...
Thank you for reading!

[JayceeC]

But there is beauty in that too. Being ith looser..the outcst is a winning proposition.