Mad Man

Mad Man

I don’t write this to present myself as mad.

I am a mad man,

But do note that I am only a man.

Sometimes I just need to write my thoughts

From my mind using a

Pen and note pad.

There are so many starts,

Where do I begin?

Second that,

Where do I end?

People dislike me when I’m outspoken

And honestly, that’s okay.

Some people who meet me

Probably won’t want to ever speak to me again,

And that’s okay because I’m not here for them.

Then again..,

Of course we can always be friends,

Then again..,..,

Of course we can be more than friends

Because you’re special!

But I don’t know if

I can be the one to depend

On,

(My heart could be more than wrong...)

If you let me in…

I can be your him,

I can be your sin,

I can be your end...

I am self-conscious at most times,

Well who isn’t?

Too much time passed

When I wrote that.

Maybe sometimes I just think way too much.

I just wanted to be more than your lush.

F**k a secret crush!

You crushed me hard

When you told me

That my misery

Made you blush.

What the f**k!?

Forgive me if I allowed

Us to move too fast.

I didn’t mean for this to rush...

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

To have done it this year twice... with same gal... how resonating and aarrgghh..

"Lessons? oh i will due them in time" spent during painfully doing so...

I'd hate to say to you "sorry am but same spirited.. newa learn..."

So.. after all this existant being... Glad to fumble to the bumple...

Hope you've been well!!! [i was to put 98 but seven was speaking "You like to sevenize this nein-er..."

So there have it hug it if u feel like...:D I-T

[sinNsincerity]

Story of my life

[Midsummer's Pint]

Now have to say.. not at all GLAD TO RESONATE..:/ i HAVE TO THO BUT IT IN..

If life hard punches kick back and feel the urge of sharing.. another poem..
Glad i am i've not been forgotten...

[Terry O'Leary]

Introspection by a mad man... can lead anywhere... good poem!

[sinNsincerity]

Very true in retrospect, but I'm down so to open and widen prospective

[Emily]

I really like that first stanza. Really set the tone for the poem!
Keep on writing!!

[sinNsincerity]

I know right! that stanza can stand alone, but I don't think I can rip it away from the rest.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

So raw. Written in a spoken word form. Nice job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Dawn!

[Stan Lee]

Loved this poem. Thanks for letting us into your head. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, and anytime!

[Aswin R Prasad]

I just loved the way you wrote this poem..
Just enough to make a reader curious to read the next line and to stay curious for the next ! :)

"If you let me in…
I can be your him,
I can be your sin,
I can be your end.."
Really loved these lines and how you wrote it..
Great use of words ! :)
Keep writing and thanks for sharing~ :)

[sinNsincerity]

And it's crazy because that's how I think all day, but that's what happens when I get lost in my head hehe.
Thank you for spending the time to read and letting me know what you liked about it. I really appreciate that.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Your always welcome! :)

[Alaska]

We're all kinda mad in our own way.
Nice poem my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Most def!
Thank you Alaska.

[pb]

I really really enjoyed your poem..
relax man, I am mad too :D
Good job,..Keep going this way!

pb

[sinNsincerity]

Hahah I think everyone is in our own ways...
Thank you!

[Celie Rose]

Really enjoyed reading your poem. Loved this stanza, "If you let me in… can be your him, can be your sin,
I can be your end..." Well written and expressed. Keep writing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Rose, I highly appreciate it and very glad you enjoyed those lines. They're one of my favorites also.

[theshygirl]

this is really good!
i love the part : you crushed me hard when you told me my misery made you blush. its so pure and raw i really love it

great job!

xxx shy

[sinNsincerity]

Yea, that drove me insane ahhha...
I'm glad you loved it shy!

[theshygirl]

So well written really