(My 6 to My 9) ONE

(My 6 to My 9) ONE

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I+ was one thing to learn how to forgive someone,

But the hardest thing to do in my life was to forgive myself.

Chaining my ego, while it awaits to be released for apocalypse now…,

But for now……………………………………………………………………………………~>



I’m looking down

         l

         l

        V


but I;m slipping


Nine f**k ups’ in my mind

For one good decision.

9 is numerology

I am 🂩

My moon

So crescent '

Where are you?

The residue of my past life

when both our soul intertwined.

A rare kind

More like 1 of a kind because

God removed you from the rest of my rib5

Downcast me into the ocean

To live as a crustacean,

And now I have to find you...

surrendered my grasp

so that ! could never fall apart

the anti -to- you gravity

My antithesis

The reason why

I compose these

In -and- complete sentences.

Our hearts were literate

but we could never put our finger on

I+

[email protected] WE LIVED OUTSIDE of the “...“

© 2016 sinNsincerity


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A great to describe the mistakes we reflect on when someone slips past you and you feel it's because the mistakes you make outweigh the good you try to give. You feel like your drowning. Crashing from the sky. This is what I feel when reading this. I really enjoyed reading this

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Yes, reflecting on them and by saying I'm looking down, I'm saying I've moved passed it, so when I s.. read more
Sultrysoul

5 Years Ago

I appreciate that and your writing is an inspiration to stir emotions whatever they may be. That is.. read more



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A great to describe the mistakes we reflect on when someone slips past you and you feel it's because the mistakes you make outweigh the good you try to give. You feel like your drowning. Crashing from the sky. This is what I feel when reading this. I really enjoyed reading this

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Yes, reflecting on them and by saying I'm looking down, I'm saying I've moved passed it, so when I s.. read more
Sultrysoul

5 Years Ago

I appreciate that and your writing is an inspiration to stir emotions whatever they may be. That is.. read more
This makes me think deeply about a lot of things, it makes me wonder, and it makes me reflect on a lot of things. One time I will read it and I will think of it relating to a romantic relationship, the next time I find points and parts that could lead me to believe that this was about parenting. It truly grabs me, although parts are ambiguous, the wonder and uncertainty make it all worth reading again! I am so glad that you recommended this to me, and I am excited to read more of your work! You're a brilliant writer with an amazing talent, please don't waste it! Like I've said before, I can tell you're a passionate person, and writing for sure seems to be something that you're passionate about!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

I hid so many meanings in this piece and I am very passionate about writing, but most importantly ev.. read more
I love this one!
Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Emily!
I love this one.
I like this one, it makes sense to me. I like the bit about chaining your ego. Very well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Krystal!
That is really great to hear.
Do not know how i missed this one...it is awesome Sweet Sin. The format so creative and adds to the write. The message is a strong one too. So much harder to forgive ourselves...we are our own worse critics. We cannot change what is already done but for it not to be in vain we need to learn to forgive so we can learn from it and move on!
Brilliant write my bestie :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

It slipped through the cracks lol
I was on a good tip when I wrote this one =D
It was .. read more
The flow, the message, the thought process, the expression, there is nothing in here that doesn't evokes appreciation. This is real masterpiece David. Especially for the message. it is difficult to forgive others but to forgive oneself is a huge task.. its like this big mountain lying there you need to cross to get over to the other side. A very Intriguing write :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so Nazia.
It is a very difficult to overcome and is a constant struggl.. read more
This was well written and my favorite part is that I can relate and I heard your voice clearly. You're an excellent writer. Forgiveness can be the hardest thing in this life, but I learned a long time ago, forgiveness is more for you than the other person! I hope your loving yourself like crazy! You deserve! Excellent writer

Best,

Laurara Monique
http://laura.productions/

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you! What part of it did you relate to?
I like how you're experimenting here.
The use of symbols and numerology to depict your
zodiac is pretty cool.
The anti to your gravity. Wow!
Loved it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

I was trying to take it to another level with this one.
You identified it well.
I'm gl.. read more
Different and interesting read of pain and love slipping away. Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Sir!

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