A Tossed Love Potion

A Tossed Love Potion

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I remember the pain

of that day;

so today,

I’ll capture that

piece of my heart

and place it in

a glass jar.

Bonjour!


Plus comme bon voyage...


Here on the shore,

I toss the memories

into the sea,

so that they’ll

never be

dealt, felt, or smelt

ever again…

Just one with

the wicked ocean.



© 2015 sinNsincerity


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I didn't know you know French!!! Ah, you and I are alike in this, I usually gather memories in boxes and gently set them free into the sea (literally!). Though probably all in my head, I feel a heavy weight lift off my shoulders. A new beginning commences. Adieu et bon voyage indeed to yesterdays!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Just a tad bit here and there.
That is so awesome! I have only done that once, but there are .. read more
Bukky.O

6 Years Ago

amazing!!!



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Love it!! I'd like to sit with you and throw a bottle of my own! Lol
You have a way with words and images for sure! Always a pleasure to read! I needed this today! Maybe I'll take my thoughts about my current situation and light a match!! Ha!
Encouraged me today! "Wicked ocean"
Tabby

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ahh if only it was that easy... I feel those memories still make their way towards us even though we toss them away..

A good piece, well penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


You took us all on a journey Silente... that's how good it was! Very descriptive and engaging and powerful...
Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


a box of memories floating away into the sea of your mind

Posted 6 Years Ago


My friend. Amazing poetry. You took me to places and deep thoughts. I liked the complete poem. You create places of decisions and I liked the ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


'Rêves brisés' - best to box & toss! Great metaphorical composition; well penned and delivered! Kudos my friend .........

Posted 6 Years Ago


Omg , this is amazing i read it twice, it is so emotional , your feeling reached me :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


The poem is really sweet, in fact the idea of dispersing your emotions into the sea is something which I found more interesting. Nonetheless, I really liked the poem. Well written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very interesting my heritage is French so you get bonus points. However this is short yet still has a lot into it, I am use to more raw power from you upfront not having to look for it. Though lovely poem my dear very unique work from you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Raylene! And bonus points indeed because I've learned something new about you.
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Raylene

7 Years Ago

Will do my friend
"I'll capture a piece of my heart and place it in a glass jar." This is beautiful and somehow a bit ironic considering how fragile the heart is and placing it into something even more fragile. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

It is totally Ironic and glad you brought that to my attention Krisna!
Thank you so much for .. read more

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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