A Tossed Love Potion

A Tossed Love Potion

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I remember the pain

of that day;

so today,

I’ll capture that

piece of my heart

and place it in

a glass jar.

Bonjour!


Plus comme bon voyage...


Here on the shore,

I toss the memories

into the sea,

so that they’ll

never be

dealt, felt, or smelt

ever again…

Just one with

the wicked ocean.



© 2015 sinNsincerity


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I didn't know you know French!!! Ah, you and I are alike in this, I usually gather memories in boxes and gently set them free into the sea (literally!). Though probably all in my head, I feel a heavy weight lift off my shoulders. A new beginning commences. Adieu et bon voyage indeed to yesterdays!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Just a tad bit here and there.
That is so awesome! I have only done that once, but there are .. read more
Bukky.O

6 Years Ago

amazing!!!



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I like your streams of thought good sir, they make for a lovely dip.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you kind Sir! I highly appreciate it.
very nice, thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cara.
if we could snip all the painful things in our lives, put them in a jar and toss them in the sea, we would feel better but pity the poor soul who takes the jar from the sea and opens it letting them all touch his mind in the same instant...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Maybe we shall place some good memories in there as well so that fool doesn't become overwhelmed heh.. read more
I didn't know you know French!!! Ah, you and I are alike in this, I usually gather memories in boxes and gently set them free into the sea (literally!). Though probably all in my head, I feel a heavy weight lift off my shoulders. A new beginning commences. Adieu et bon voyage indeed to yesterdays!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Just a tad bit here and there.
That is so awesome! I have only done that once, but there are .. read more
Bukky.O

6 Years Ago

amazing!!!
A sure remedy ..to toss the pain away to the wicked sea..a very creative piece so well crafted..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you Fran! I highly appreciate it!
  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

You're welcome,
You put the few and right words just so they bring out a strikingly beautiful piece. Dazzling work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you Rana! It's always a pleasure. =D
so creative and lovely...love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you Pash!
yes, that wicked ocean can have the misery...i am washing my heart clean of the past.

nicely expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Yes very much so, I'm learning to wash away yesterday as I wake up today. To better myself whether t.. read more
Just be careful when you bottle things up, if your jar is glass, it could shatter!
And even oceans can dry up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

The glass jar is the poem, my confession to everyone, and the ocean is me finally saying and giving .. read more
marcus

8 Years Ago

Awesome!!!

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East Los Angeles, CA



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