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A Poem by sinNsincerity

She Was On The Earth Side 
I Was On The Water Side, 
Together We Made Mud…

© 2016 sinNsincerity


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Hmm... So few words, yet so deep. But only if one takes the time to think about it.

Water + Earth = Mud
A simple concept, one most children would know. However, what are the implications of this simple concept?

The biggest thing that comes to mind, is the mud house. Which may still be used today (I don't know.) Either way, one of the first types of shelter. Which, as I go deeper, brings me to something else...

Because of the implication of a romantic relationship, I can see a metaphor, one of the shelter and security a pair of loving parents (Earth + Water) to a child (Mud) Similar to the security and shelter of a mud house.

Of course, I could be overthinking and overanalyzing, as I am apt to do. But it is fun to attempt to dig deep into the words, and find the true meaning. Which can be done with few given words, as I have just done.

I am only able to do this because there is a good amount of hidden meanings int= the few words given. So I applaud you. You are quite the wordsmith.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

It was true, we no longer date, but everything I write is or has been true at a point...at least fro.. read more
Andrew Ballard

8 Years Ago

That is a very interesting and nice way to find inspiration for writing. Especially poetry. Commenda.. read more
sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for that.
I usually write about things after they pass and I gave them some.. read more



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And there is nothing like the feeling of mud. It seeps into the body with a refreshing affect. It's calming it's healing it's good for the soul. Earth and water both meant for each other. Great once again

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

It's most certainly meant to be as one.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of.. read more
Sultrysoul

8 Years Ago

Great minds...lol
Ha! So you don't enjoy mud wrestling? This is a great way of saying you don't match. However, muddin' can be fun for a bit, as long as you don't get stuck in the mud.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I have never mud wrestled haha I wish!
You can look at it in such a way of not being compati.. read more
Hmm... So few words, yet so deep. But only if one takes the time to think about it.

Water + Earth = Mud
A simple concept, one most children would know. However, what are the implications of this simple concept?

The biggest thing that comes to mind, is the mud house. Which may still be used today (I don't know.) Either way, one of the first types of shelter. Which, as I go deeper, brings me to something else...

Because of the implication of a romantic relationship, I can see a metaphor, one of the shelter and security a pair of loving parents (Earth + Water) to a child (Mud) Similar to the security and shelter of a mud house.

Of course, I could be overthinking and overanalyzing, as I am apt to do. But it is fun to attempt to dig deep into the words, and find the true meaning. Which can be done with few given words, as I have just done.

I am only able to do this because there is a good amount of hidden meanings int= the few words given. So I applaud you. You are quite the wordsmith.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

It was true, we no longer date, but everything I write is or has been true at a point...at least fro.. read more
Andrew Ballard

8 Years Ago

That is a very interesting and nice way to find inspiration for writing. Especially poetry. Commenda.. read more
sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for that.
I usually write about things after they pass and I gave them some.. read more
Sounds like true love to me, great concept thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Bear, I really appreciate it!
I love how you described this, without just coming out and saying it in a boring way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for acknowledging that and spending the time to read it Emily.
I'm really g.. read more
mud cools; mud cleanses; mud builds homes... the two were born to mix and become something different...love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you and I'm glad you did.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us thr.. read more
Very creative and humorous to say the least,
keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reading bro.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our .. read more
Oh this is a cute write... for some reason it took me back to my childhood and making mud pies.. lol
Great write as always Bestie!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

haha too funny! that made me smile hard!
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

LOL....you make me laugh too...Bestie!! :)
sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

That's amazing!!!
I LOVE it!
It's so cutie!!
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you did. thank you
So short and so simple yet it comes across with a much deeper, more powerful meaning. I loved the contrast of the two sides and what they create when they come together.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!

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