Eardrum

Eardrum

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Hubba hubba.

Hubble eyes...

All I see is star light

When I tap into

my third mind.

Lub- lub!

My love?

Can you hear?

It’s my heart’s love

banging on

your eardrum.

© 2015 sinNsincerity


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WOW! What a load of intriguing imagination here! I can't believe this. I love it when someone surprises me with a novel approach to writing love poems (so many love poems are so similar!) Excellent use of onomatopoeia to SHOW instead of tell, based on SOUND, which goes with your theme so perfectly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Why thank you Margie, that's magic. I'm always thinking of new ways to write to stand out from the r.. read more



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Space connection is quite imaginative. I'll have to start wearing my hearing aid again.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading this one John. One of my favorite writes.
I love how much you are able to express in such a short stanza.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Jas
I love this, makes me think of my love, and the sound of his heart beat

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Posted 3 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

What...........?
Neville

3 Years Ago

The language of a pc crash methinks.... am so sorry... now then, let me try and start again.... gr.. read more
WOW! What a load of intriguing imagination here! I can't believe this. I love it when someone surprises me with a novel approach to writing love poems (so many love poems are so similar!) Excellent use of onomatopoeia to SHOW instead of tell, based on SOUND, which goes with your theme so perfectly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Why thank you Margie, that's magic. I'm always thinking of new ways to write to stand out from the r.. read more
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BBP
Your poems always read like a game of falling dominoes...one line just falls right in to the next. Always a good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

This thread is awesome hahaha
Love you guys!
Gee

3 Years Ago

Every build meeting I attend with my boss starts with." Don't not say anything Gee "
BBP

3 Years Ago

LMAOOO Whenever it's a sensitive situation, I get told the same thing... that or.."Just be nice Bev... read more
This is sweet and brings many thoughts to my mind as I read. Well done!
Tabby

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

3 Years Ago

Thank you! HAHA well it was your poem that spurred my mind!
Tabby
sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Love is love. Have a splendid day Mrs. Mac
Tabby Mac

3 Years Ago

You too! Enjoy!
I actually enjoyed the lightheartedness and simplicity here. And it has nice rythm. It was an enjoyable read on this sunny afternoon.

Posted 3 Years Ago


sweet.. simple yet it gives a vivid picture of someone who's inlove

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like this one. Very simplistic and sweet.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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