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A Poem by sinNsincerity

Allow me to be the Lost of all your years.

I'm the lost of you.

Yes YOU!

It's true.

Allow me to be your missing truth

Like you're my missing rib.

Let me Sin,

Please my dear,

I'm Sincere.

My blues were never broken

Just bruises you took for misfortunes.

Panda Express cookies,

Not quite destiny,

But I keep on loving you...

No clues for the Treasure Island

My heart was a token.

The Hook to your Neverland,

But that didn't Pan out.

No help.

No formula for the potion

Just Voila

Like a prayer to God.

I was handed the scripture,

Which lead to her worship.

No poems written

Just soul smitten.

Smitten...

Love the light,

But driven to be alone.

Call that insight.

Who's he?

The new guy.

The nice guy.

The I don't give a f**k type,

But I'm bright,

So I bite

My tongue

With all my might.

I'm high

And I'm enjoying

My high.

Lead my way

through the night.

Lead my way

through the bright.

Lead my way

Outside the

Wrong and right.








© 2016 sinNsincerity


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"My blues were never broken
Just bruises you took for misfortunes."

"The Hook to your Neverland- but that just didn't Pan out."

This poem reads so easily and beautifully, I am curious how natural this one came to you. I absolutely love this one!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Not natural at all, more like supernatural! Almost like a possession unexplainable feelings, thought.. read more


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This is stunning! I love and love the streets of your imagination dear author :) I'm a big fan.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

As am I, I admire your mind and your writing with the utmost respect and find myself in awe each tim.. read more
I loved the part about Neverland and Peter Pan! I thought it added to the story but the funny kind of cancel out the sad in it. Lovely poem! You could feel all the emotion in it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading Quinn, I really do appreciate that because it ones one of the few line.. read more
Quinn W

7 Years Ago

You're so welcome!
That was a pretty fine pile of writing.

It even had a couple 4th wall violations.

I bet you could shorten it a bit, but even if you don't, well done.

I liked it quite a lot.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I dun believe in walls bruh
Yes, outside the wrong and the right, that is where love sometimes leads us. So much sacrifice- let me be your truth, your sin, the one you bruise, regard my heart as a token, biting the tongue, soul smitten- what we do for love, even if it isn't quite destiny, the high, even though the blues never pass. The fantasy images thrown in here and there, to me, communicate the interplay between the surface fantasy and the reality - more then just playing with words, even though playing with words can be fun too. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

It really is quite exhausting and pays a toll; especially when you go all the way in...
Somet.. read more
Powerful flow of thoughts. They were direct and honest. I liked the directness and the coldness of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote, you the man!
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome and too kind.
Let me Sin,
Please my dear,
I'm Sincere.
My blues were never broken
Just bruises you took for misfortunes.


nicely written.i like it


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Yea that's my favorite part also, but you left off the Panda Express Cookie part. I die every time I.. read more
Love the story book work into this emotional poem dear very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I've been studying Aristotle's Poetics and it has totally changed the way of looking at w.. read more
Raylene

7 Years Ago

Well I'm happy to have read it
Wow...diggin this! A lot unsaid here, a metaphor for so much.

Gritty and brave, so dope!

Regards
Rach x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you Rach, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
i like it man, good wordplay :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you did, Thanks!

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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