Marsh-Mellowed Moans

Marsh-Mellowed Moans

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Your caterpillar heart finally found a way to fly away from your withins.

Wait a sex!

Sec.

You left behind your sin

Have you forgot about him?

Wait!

You forgot me...

Your dandelion's vomited sun sets,

Which spoke of yesteryears and promises of your echo.

HelloOOOOOOHelLoooooHELLOOOOo???

Hell,

She has risen to a new level.

Untouchable you are...

Must I touch myself to heed the weeping welts

Of the void that you've infra- and ultrasonically sent forth?

Unable to hear you call within this human mind,

So I'm searching the nin9 after 6ix


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The Capricorn to my Cancer!

Force will Awaken Perfection with Patience.

Opposing forces, but we both need stability...

evol tcefrep A

                         For one another.

You needed my tru-emotions for the passion

And the passion wasn't taken lightly when

You entered my intimacy.

Balancing the thawing with the lacking warmth.

Never questioning devotion

Because we met before actuality

With different circumstances.

Unexplainable,

But why do I only find you in the deep?

You're the obsessed lunatic;

Me = the clingy housewife.

And Karmic debt must be paid before

We can be happy together.

Let's find away

To ReLive our ancient love story

And mend the broken.

That once in a lifetime love.

Bellerose,

Save me!

© 2020 sinNsincerity


Author's Note

sinNsincerity
~Bellerose~

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Such a journey into the mind- which moves from one thing to another, word associations creating streams that sometimes herald previously unknown connections. While obscure, this is an intriguing poem that wants to be read as fast as the mind that moves from one experience to another, links not always understood but there all the same. The poem comes into an integrated thought in the last several lines. The "save me!" Is a great ending. Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I've learn to do that by reading and studying William Faulkner. And Although it does move from one t.. read more



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I don't know about bellerose, but the Leo to my Sagittarius, yes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slightly surreal / weird but compelling nevertheless.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, I like this. Your words are winding and flowing and double meanings are toying with our senses as your mind works in three different ways to interconnect and tell us a story that you've only just figured out yourself as you wrote the cryptic lines... Bravo! Nice play with words. ~JenniferNichole

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you JenniferNichole, I just try to make the madness look beautiful for you all.
I highl.. read more
This was great... I felt as if I was journeying through someone's thoughts. Thank you for sharing your powerful words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I love taking people's minds on adventures and to expose them to new forms of writing tha.. read more
Sometimes when extraordinary words do no justice in a critique-

F**k! That was.... That was absolutely something. I'm always most at a loss for words on the things I find most extraordinary. This piece was extraordinary.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you once again, I love it! This is why I write, not for a pay check, I wouldn't be on this sit.. read more
Such a journey into the mind- which moves from one thing to another, word associations creating streams that sometimes herald previously unknown connections. While obscure, this is an intriguing poem that wants to be read as fast as the mind that moves from one experience to another, links not always understood but there all the same. The poem comes into an integrated thought in the last several lines. The "save me!" Is a great ending. Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I've learn to do that by reading and studying William Faulkner. And Although it does move from one t.. read more
"Let's find away To ReLive our ancient love story." These two lines stick with me. I like the imagary and it is well written and expressed. Awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you did, and I love those lines as well because they are what drives me. Maybe when I find .. read more
Thank you for sharing this poetry, Sin of Sincerity. It's a bit of a surrealistic voyage in your mind, I guess. a style you master so well. :) Rudi

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Rudi. I hope and strive to journey deeper into the unknown and bring y'all along. Thank .. read more
Woah! A power-packed piece of work!
Sometimes we are consumed by insatiable desires.
Articulate!
I loved the way it ends.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

An enormous amount of insatiable desires, but mastering them. Thank you Jyoti, it is my pleasure!
Jyoti_Ablaze

7 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)
Real poetic momentum going on here and the content leaves you wanting more crackling beneath ones skin.

Very nice indeed!

Ngā mihi maioha (warmest regards)
Rach

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

"Crackling beneath ones skin," nice! Love your list of poetic genius, I'm glad you'd enjoyed it Rach.. read more

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Added on July 10, 2016
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