Give Me End

The one who says she really loves me,

Is the one I can't have yet.

And she knows this.

Polarity is frozen.

Yet; Love is my target,

So allow me to zone in.

But is there another way to love you?

Is there?

Let me share 'em with you,

I'm who.

Who?

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Call me Mr. Marlboro,

But I'm your toy

#Hasbro

Ouija?

No-

Just  Wicca-

Pedia mind.

But please take the time

To undefine the bottom line.

Do you mind if I incline

You the opportunity to just mind?

Ajar, I'll leave your heart at far...

But so far...

My poetry is leading me further away from she,

So it's hard to love anyone

'Till I'm DONE

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. The woman I speak on, we have been knowing each other for eight years now, but we both know we are soul mates. Just patiently waiting for the timing to be right.
Your analysis was dead on.

[richieb]

Good flow, lots of energy. I enjoyed your poem and like your style.
Richie b.

[sinNsincerity]

Positive energy and love. Thank you Richie, it was my pleasure.

[T. Edana Talbott]

I really, really like this! Nice flow, I like how you transition from idea to idea, it's really cool.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Edina, I do my best to present what's in my mind.

[Inject Positivity]

Kind of very interesting concept, first of all the construction of the poem was very good... The ending is what helped me to understand the deep meaning of this write... Cleverly done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[sinNsincerity]

It was my pleasure Dimanche, thank you.
-David

[Adorkable Neko]

I love the flow of this poem, wonderful work!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you did.

[Nina H.]

Interesting poem. Really like the last lines. Keep writing. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did.

[GalaxyGhost]

I like how the poem seems to drift away. It's really interesting!

[sinNsincerity]

Things that drift away eventually converge.

[RaeAlyn]

The only criticism I can offer you it that the lines,
"#Hasbro
Ouija?
No-
Just Wica-
Pedia mind."
don't really make a lot of sense. Otherwise good job.

[sinNsincerity]

I makes total sense.
I said I was a toy. Something to be playedone.
Hasbro is a board game company, which marketed the Ouija board, but them I refer to wica, but not witchcraft. That why I throw in the Pedia. Because it's based on knowledge acquired.
You just have to think figuratively; rather than, in literal tems.

[RaeAlyn]

I tend to be very literal.

[Akshita]

Wow! That is a really nice poem.: )

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Akshita.

[Anindita Janhabee]

excellent poetry... good way of describing love though... liked the flow..
keep it up....
Anindita : )

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you liked it.