Merlin's Miracles

Merlin's Miracles

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I found the beauty
And the beast
Inside of me.
My Bellerose...
Shores pulling away from tides
Like the 6 from the 9,
But I believe in the 3,
And that's the love
I hold inside of me.
That's my heart's sacrifice,
I lust for virtue and vice.
It's unruling to be still,
But still...
I'm still;
And it slays...
Like that 1 thing I ride away in
When it snows.
And it's cold.
And this sweater will
Never comfort this hole.
And I'm the one.
That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain.
Mimos...Ugh...
I dare you to say you don't want to get you some.

© 2020 sinNsincerity


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I enjoyed the logic and tales inside the poem.
"That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain. "
The above tale was my favorite. No-one does things the easy ways. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

No siree, I'm always trying to give you guys something new.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You did well.



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Tales and logical thinking weaved into a poem...
clever and useful to convey the journey.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Years Ago

Thank you Josie!
Josie E. Cook M. A.

3 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Lusting for virtue and vice at the same time can be devastating. Valentine

Posted 3 Years Ago


Awesome poem!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Another good poem. I usually hate reading poetry (probably why it took me so long to get around to commenting lol) but your writing is so...unique?...awesome?...I'm struggling to find the right words. Fr lack of better, you hold my attention. Which is quite a feat.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

I usually hate reading poetry as well because it's all been done before and people say the same thin.. read more
EssenceofDaringx

4 Years Ago

Keep doing what you're doing, 'cause I enjoy all things unique.
Love the title great poem really

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Pink Pastel

4 Years Ago

Your welcome;)
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Oh well, sometimes you gotta take the right option, not the one that's easiest... :)
I like the wordplay, and the little part with the numbers... :) Nice work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

There's is a right option, but I told to follow my heart.
I'm ♋🦀 and 3=God. The Holy tr.. read more
D

4 Years Ago

Following your heart is the right choice :)
so nice and unique !! i really love your style!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rea, I'm glad that you do.
raven

4 Years Ago

you're very welcome !
You are always so creative with your work,
you know how much I enjoy reading your work and this
piece doesn't fall short, keep up the awesome work,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

For shizzle! God bless bro. Stay safe!
I loved the play with numbers here-- calling up numerology and tarot, and the magic we are surrounded by. This poem has a unique voice and flow that I enjoyed, with passages that resonate with me- "shores pulling away from the tides . . ." "And this sweater will never comfort this hole" . . . Filled with opposites and paradoxes that I enjoy contemplating. Thank you for a deep and thought-provoking read.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

Tarot, Wicca, and Alchemy are somethings that induce the magik. Numerology is something new I've bee.. read more
Deep and interesting! Really enjoyed reading it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so Akshita.

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