Heart Arrest

Heart Arrest

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I have wandering eyes,

A wandering soul,

I wonder where to start?

Of all the days,

Please don't walk away...

Just go!

My SiN is a cent.

Sent within this

Piggy bank of a heart.

Here goes a kiss...

Not hell bent,

But we resist the heaven sent.

Take a sip,

Can you taste it?

Let me wipe my lips.

I love your hips.

Pardon my lisp,

But it's quite obvious

That I'm vomiting this s**t.

More like magik!

More organized -

Sex never circumcised

Because we run it all night.

Come to the other side.

The darkside.

This is where my mind rest.

A penny for your thought?

Does that make sense?

And I'm getting nice,

Quite precise.

I'm 9th.

Did you wander?

'Cause I'm your wonder.

I've paid for this weight

That lays beneath your gaze.

The image of your soul dwells and swells...

Hard not soft.

Fall in love.

I'll be your rock bottom.

Please, let me catch you.

Trap___

But it's a secret,

And I can keep it.

Never have to lie,

Never public,

Never forcing the passion

Because there's never a doubt.

This is seduction.

Spill something.

Are you drunk yet?

Because this climax has you erected,

When staring at your reflection.

Are you feeling something?

I'll say it again...

This is seduction.

A comfortable stew,

A comfortable mood,

A comfortable view.

Let me not confuse you,

I want to peruse you,

I don't want to bruise,

Use,

Or lose you...

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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sinNsincerity
TWA
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Reading this I struggled to decide if I liked the way it read. I'd lose myself in your flow and rhythm and then it would change. Then I'd pick up another pace all for it to change again. And then I realised that is what I love about this. And you never set the pace in the same way which was wonderful. So more than just saying how beautiful this is, I'd say that your delivery is just as enchanting as the story.
(i liked reading aloud even more than in my head)

Thanks for sharing!
J

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

That's pretty awesome to hear, I wrote that opening line to foreshadow just that as the stream of co.. read more
Jenny

7 Years Ago

deep thinking!
i like that you put so much thought and effort into not only your work but the.. read more



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Very nice flow of thoughts. I liked them.
"I don't want to bruise,
Use,
Or lose you...."
The above line. Nice closing to the poem. The thoughts felt honest and true.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir, I highly appreciate that and I'm glad that you'd enjoyed it. Have a blessed .. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
Reading this I struggled to decide if I liked the way it read. I'd lose myself in your flow and rhythm and then it would change. Then I'd pick up another pace all for it to change again. And then I realised that is what I love about this. And you never set the pace in the same way which was wonderful. So more than just saying how beautiful this is, I'd say that your delivery is just as enchanting as the story.
(i liked reading aloud even more than in my head)

Thanks for sharing!
J

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

That's pretty awesome to hear, I wrote that opening line to foreshadow just that as the stream of co.. read more
Jenny

7 Years Ago

deep thinking!
i like that you put so much thought and effort into not only your work but the.. read more
This was a sheer pleasure to read. :)
Your fan
Ana B.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you once again Ana!
Beautifully thoughtful piece, as always.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Edina-thank you!
Good LORD! I dont even know what to say to you...
I'll be your rock bottom.
Please, let me catch you.

If i could live in your words i would take my self a bed and rest. Damn Sin!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I have been waiting for the one who those words would touch.
I love those two lines.
T.. read more
The best part of this poem: The title, itself!

No denial about my very own "Heart Arrest".

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fahmida Mehreen

8 Years Ago

Works both way because the bars are double-bladed swords.
It is not me who has put my heart .. read more
sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I truly understand what you are saying. I myself can't trust anyone anymore. People in general have .. read more
Fahmida Mehreen

8 Years Ago

You too! :)
I love the journey of each and every one of your poems. Though there is a theme, you cover so many different ideas/topics that make the reader think and feel. It's beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I try to stay consistent with the theme and my style. Over time, it has evolved due to the fact that.. read more
EssenceofDaringx

8 Years Ago

You're well on your way to coining your own style :)
Your poetry is full of thought, its also quite meaningful.
This poem takes us on a journey throughall your different thoughts and feelings it seems.
I liked the little bit of rhymes you did have in there. Especially when u rhymed some pretty big words, impressive.
I enjoyed reading this. Keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I write about someone and for them, so I owe it to them to put in a lot of thought.
My pleasu.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Yer that makes sense :)
Your very much welcome :)
Playful and illusive, yet standing in plain sight. A lot of imagery slithering within the emotional counterpoints.
The construction is strong, and there is an earnest invitation to appreciate the text without an expectation to accept an absolute meaning.
Rhyming outside of a measurable scheme, I have to say well done, its casual and elegant.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I leave it quite ambiguous, so that people may not seek my meaning, but rather their own...
DAMNNNNNNN!
this made me confused i dont know if you were burning the readers or flirting but awesome poem really

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

Maybe both.... I'll never tell...
Pink Pastel

8 Years Ago

Ha ha ha it's cool^-^

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