Bankrupt

No warranty came along with their hearts.

I've musta lost a dozen homes;

Ugh,

But they were the ones who had

Foreclosed this love of mine.

Loan, after loan, after loan,

They each fell through.

That's what they were.

Alone.

Is that what I am?

Reckless abandonment...

But hey,

I'll be alright.

At least,

That's what

I always

Tell

My

Self.

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[richieb]

Nice writing my man, I enjoyed it. Nothing wrong with telling ourselves we will survive. Learning from past challenges, I wear my scars as badges of honor.
Richie b.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Richie, glad to hears so!

[wordman]

ahh ! but you can get a reprieve from that bankrupt heart

[sinNsincerity]

haha Very much so Ron.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and elegant, a thought train that spun and weaved to approach ones ears, well done, good read.

[sinNsincerity]

My pleasure Thomas.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Quite a nicely penned poem. The comparison is simply amazing. Keep writing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so, I appreciate that.