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My Crow

My Crow

A Poem by sinNsincerity

She is spoken poetry.

My sacred rosary.

But she is the one

Who holds on and pr(e)ys on me.

I'm the beauty to her beast.

Such is why my heart is the perfect feast.

Hip check,

Her hips on my neck.

Lips pressed.

Woop, zoop, sloop. . .

Bud, Not Buddy.

But you’re more than that

My lovely.

Now,

Allow me to take your breath.

Winter solstice brings out my best

And I towered the pyramid steps to capture

The heart inside of your chest.

Heka and offerings-

From putty to pottery,

The transformation of the conscious

To the sub lays the forbidden poetry.

This is not blessed,

But a sin fest.

Drunk off of your Witch's brew,

All the while,

Dangling off of your balcony view.

Do you hear my gloom?

I’m calling upon you-

Ms. Moon.

Please accept my sacred voodoo.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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Thus far, my favorite poem from you. Everything works well in this poem, structure, word choice, flow, etc. As the reader, I get a clear image of a beautiful but manipulative woman, deeply insecure (which is why she doesn't allow anyone as close as the writer wants to be). Frustration and desperation are strong emotions I pick up, and streaks of bitterness (for the rejection, refusal to love, recognize, etc). An enjoyable read, as all good poetry is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you had enjoyed it Robert and for thinking so.



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"She is spoken poetry
My sacred rosary..."

David, these two brief lines spoke volumes to me...and I simply had to tell you so!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

And that makes it all worth it.
Thank you for reading Kelly, I'm delighted to hear that. Hol.. read more
Such powerful words and the flow is sublime. It's a pleasure to read such beautiful poetry
:) Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Julie, the pleasure is all mine. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
splendid write my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ms. Charles, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I like the lines, they are like, ego and alter-ego, love with hate, the choice of words.

I feel like sincere dedication from her, even it is also from his side, a sincereity.

I really admire the word choices.



Posted 2 Years Ago


Just beautiful. Beautifully written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This poem was written so naturally that I feel like I was carried along with it. So beautiful and elegant and when read aloud it flows so nicely which I think is so important when considering what makes good poetry. As well as this, the images in this are so mystical and eerie, I feel like you have explored love in a way that we may not usually consider. Amazing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so, that is the goal. I use force, but I do not force it.
That is really beautiful, thank you for sharing that with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


It was teeth-clenchingly good.... Loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Woah! This is amazing! I'm impressed! Keep up the good work, you have raw talent!

Posted 2 Years Ago


deep and mystical write,under her spell of voodoo,i liked it,a catholic i pressume,
holding the rosary during prayer,but you hiccup on prayer

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on February 3, 2018
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sinNsincerity
sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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