Cut Me Deep

Cut Me Deep

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I tap into you

to tap in to me.

Breath out then breath out.

I forget to take a moment to let you in.

That's just the way my breathing

flows.

Can't you see?

Just my cup of tea.

Enter my soul.

You cut me deep.

The deeds of your heart's

teeth has left me a

mouthful of cavities.

Tummy growling,

Have you had enough to eat?

Haven't you had enough of me?

Have you had me,

you wouldn't need

Me.

Finaly,

Love

Me.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

That's beautiful E.N.



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Has the sound of a twisted type of love. The speaker comes across as something of a masochist. I do not understand the lines: "Have you had me/you wouldn't need/Me."

Posted 1 Year Ago


such a wonderful read young ma'am. Now try to create a story from such a theme and you will have many loathing the words of your thoughts right down to the very soul ...... they will enjoy it .

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very deep and powerful. As usual you leave a lot to think about. Fine write my friend.
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Powerful, and very deep. This is a beautiful piece, I love your style.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I'm not going to lie, this one is too deep for me. But I like the style and descriptions.

Posted 2 Years Ago


wow every out there brought tears to my heart

Posted 2 Years Ago


Damn, this is good work. There's a lot of situational awareness too (couldn't think of the right word for perspective) which is crazy good too. Shame I can't measure myself up to this kind of format writing but that doesn't stop me from reading and loving other people's skills in doing what I cannot.

So true too. Love cuts deep in our souls.

Posted 2 Years Ago


"The deeds of your heart's teeth has left me a mouthful of cavities" That is a good line. So dark, i love it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

"Tis true...
I felt your pain throughout. I feel as though we met n I looked into your soul. This will stay with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

If I cast a spell, would you lose control?
I hope I stay with you.
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Jas
This makes me think of my current relationship, at times we are at each others throats then in an instant I’m in his arms and it feels like home

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Yep, that sound about right.

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Added on March 11, 2018
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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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