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Cut Me Deep

Cut Me Deep

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I tap into you

to tap in to me.

Breath out then breath out.

I forget to take a moment to let you in.

That's just the way my breathing

flows.

Can't you see?

Just my cup of tea.

Enter my soul.

You cut me deep.

The deeds of your heart's

teeth has left me a

mouthful of cavities.

Tummy growling,

Have you had enough to eat?

Haven't you had enough of me?

Have you had me,

you wouldn't need

Me.

Finaly,

Love

Me.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

That's beautiful E.N.



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I love this ! i love the feeling i get inside reading it a nice dark place in my mind comes out

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dark and beautiful. Just perfect!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sometimes, we love someone so much, so much that we even do everything for them. We only think of them, care for them. we give our hearts to them but at the end of the story, we will just end up brokenhearted.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very emotional, the pain just jumping off the page! I loved the connections you made to breathing... sucking the life out of you! Brilliant work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow, sad and deep. thank you for sharing this with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


love this line -
The deeds of your heart's
teeth has left me a
mouthful of cavities.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad that you did Ms. Tragic.
Gentle, wonderful and powerful words shared my friend. I had to read again. The words sweet, worthwhile and a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend.
Thank you.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure my friend and you are welcome.
Each time I'm elated reading your poems! From conveying meanings to entertainment em, feels like a matte lipstick in lips! you know absolute finishing touch! 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Punch me I bleed.
-Spiderman 2
Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

I was never a fan of spiderman series since I'm too scared of spiders!
Alecia

2 Years Ago

Because of your style , I would be just be over the moon if you read my poem on my page called "mirr.. read more
seems we spend a lot of time in pain brought on by love

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Years Ago

u got me sin
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Much Love Ron!
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

"I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more lov.. read more
Wasn't there a song called "Hurt So Good" by John Mellancamp years ago? That's what came to mind when I read this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Good, so hurt me . . .

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Added on March 11, 2018
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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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