Cut Me Deep

Cut Me Deep

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I tap into you

to tap in to me.

Breath out then breath out.

I forget to take a moment to let you in.

That's just the way my breathing

flows.

Can't you see?

Just my cup of tea.

Enter my soul.

You cut me deep.

The deeds of your heart's

teeth has left me a

mouthful of cavities.

Tummy growling,

Have you had enough to eat?

Haven't you had enough of me?

Have you had me,

you wouldn't need

Me.

Finaly,

Love

Me.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

That's beautiful E.N.



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the codependence of the heart, bites. You expose raw emotion, crying out, and hoping for love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Inner wealth can never be taxed, only multiplied
could be your next poem
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I will have to dwell and meditate on that.
I usually don't attack a poem.
I let it co.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Yes, that's my approach as well

The sins and my sincerity
Leapt deftly from what's said
But what the hell, I’ll never tell
Just one more thing to dread

Once more comes words of wisdom,
from the center of the stage
We see the folly of assume
Life’s verses smear the page

So should we find we disagree
what is the chosen fix?
We’ll try to see, twixt you and me
which one of us to nix.

Of course my friend, if you’ll make room
I’ll join your search for doom.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I am a doomer indeed.
Used to be a starchaser, but
I've went
"enter my soul" "you cut me deep"...awesome lines..loved it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Mikku, I'm glad you'd did
Love must be balanced the same weight in either side of the scale- cannot be forced if true and never hungers in completeness- wonderful words with a difference🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I hear that.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

.......😍😶😱
so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

That's beautiful E.N.
I very thought provoking write sinNsincerity. My hunger disappears if someone asks me to love them, if I know I affect them deeply.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

What if the hunger isn't a physical one?
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

Then that would be intimidating :)
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Very much so, indeed. 🤓

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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