Whip, Beat, and Mix

Whip, Beat, and Mix

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The night Owl.

Out N about.

Out on the prowl.

I clown N play in the wind.

Had a cow N then I

took a swim and a gaze into a

backwards black top hat,

and now,

I'm Mr. Black Cat.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Do you believe in us?

I believe in meow.

Please my dear,

do you hear my cries?

If not,

believe in my fuss.

What the f**k?

Do you give more than one?

You don’t believe in the Sun,

So you called me out of my rust.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Belief is a must.

Do you hear my Moo?

I couldn’t get enough of You,

so I danced and waned into

the last night of your Doom.

Your crescent moon smile

had just all of the right grooves

that whisked me back into the

lite light.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world.

I'm air again.

I play in the wind.

I can't wait for you

to summon me again.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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we all do need someone don't we!? https://youtu.be/N5jlPL1tNDY
i like the Alice in Wonderland hints .. the Cheshire Cat so memorable in all of the adventures there ...out of all your lines this one strikes me hardest:
"I'm air again." in all the want, needing and pleading ...that line flew me away like fresh breaths ;)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Poetry is my only love.
Iv'e been reading a lot of Latin American writer's and their use of m.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i will do that...thank you so much! there is so much to get excited about in poetry ..."magical real.. read more



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Another great piece! Well done! Love the alice in wonderland reference

Posted 1 Day Ago


Cute repetition
with links in mind
as it progresses


Posted 1 Year Ago


So great! I always marvel at your writing and your rants. Love the sense of being over the edge lost in the insanity. As always, keep sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is cleverly written, and it flows along quite nicely. From a owl, to a cat, then a cow, and finally the wind. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is sooo fun! "I believe in meow" - this really made me giggle. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it made you giggle Luci. Cat's only meow at humans.
wow I like it, it made me feel so much love when you did this poem well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm all about love
Wonderful use of words and thoughts. You took the reader with your wild journey and wild places. Play the wind for love. Would be cool. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Always a pleasure Sir!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and I liked this poem.
Everything magical happens by the light of the moon. Shining bright in a dark velvet sky. I sense a dark desperation here, where the writer is desperate to engage. Imagination running wild, with strong imagery. Your style is quite different from other poetry I have read on this site.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I am a Cancer*69, so it is only right that the moon speaks to and through me.
Look up Magical.. read more
I really like how you gave the ending quite an eerie feel by using "summon". It made me look at your poem differently, in a good way.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Katelyn.
I liked it...The flow of your poem was really nice..I indeed liked it..I am eager to read more of your works..Keep on writing..
Riddhi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Riddhi.

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