Whip, Beat, and Mix

Whip, Beat, and Mix

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The night Owl.

Out N about.

Out on the prowl.

I clown N play in the wind.

Had a cow N then I

took a swim and a gaze into a

backwards black top hat,

and now,

I'm Mr. Black Cat.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Do you believe in us?

I believe in meow.

Please my dear,

do you hear my cries?

If not,

believe in my fuss.

What the f**k?

Do you give more than one?

You don’t believe in the Sun,

So you called me out of my rust.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Belief is a must.

Do you hear my Moo?

I couldn’t get enough of You,

so I danced and waned into

the last night of your Doom.

Your crescent moon smile

had just all of the right grooves

that whisked me back into the

lite light.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world.

I'm air again.

I play in the wind.

I can't wait for you

to summon me again.

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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we all do need someone don't we!? https://youtu.be/N5jlPL1tNDY
i like the Alice in Wonderland hints .. the Cheshire Cat so memorable in all of the adventures there ...out of all your lines this one strikes me hardest:
"I'm air again." in all the want, needing and pleading ...that line flew me away like fresh breaths ;)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Poetry is my only love.
Iv'e been reading a lot of Latin American writer's and their use of m.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i will do that...thank you so much! there is so much to get excited about in poetry ..."magical real.. read more



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The flow of my poems has been something ive been working on and this poem has rhythms and flow down pat. I enjoyed this poem

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

And you will find and master that as you continue to write and study it.
The whimsical tone of this poem made it a very enjoyable read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I hope you never forget.
Lots of mix here, street talk, rhymes, line length...a poem that shows you can write !

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

'Twas my pleasure Leslie.
a magic man,from an owl to a cow,then a black tie event,my the time just went

Posted 2 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

...Phew...
Sometimes bring away with the fairies is the best place to be where we can be one with the dance of our emotions- we wait for the next round- as if we need to reassure ourselves that we’ve been found and not rejected but need to come to terms at times that some things are best left alone- 🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Rejection is a non issue for me and I leave nothing alone, but I guess I could sit alone in a corner.. read more
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Years Ago

Each to their own and goodness and happiness is all that certain beings bring- sometimes thoughts an.. read more
we all do need someone don't we!? https://youtu.be/N5jlPL1tNDY
i like the Alice in Wonderland hints .. the Cheshire Cat so memorable in all of the adventures there ...out of all your lines this one strikes me hardest:
"I'm air again." in all the want, needing and pleading ...that line flew me away like fresh breaths ;)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Poetry is my only love.
Iv'e been reading a lot of Latin American writer's and their use of m.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i will do that...thank you so much! there is so much to get excited about in poetry ..."magical real.. read more
Oh wow! I loved this! Your rhythm and flow were spot on, and I loved your use of the implied allusion of the Cheshire cat, so many great connotations!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sami, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
-David
Lovely picture of a feeling so rare yet when imprisoned within this heart may enslave the soul. Very well written

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem I feel everyone can relate to from some point of time in his or her life. Enjoyed the read :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Groovygirl17

2 Years Ago

The sense of desperation. In terms of lost love (my personal take on the poem - in the mindset I’m.. read more
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

May it be tat I am outside of reality?
Outside of sanity?
Magic . . .
Groovygirl17

2 Years Ago

Exactly, my friend.
I feel it within me. I adore your writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Boygene, I'm really appreciate it.

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