In Lander's Fields

This is a light hearted work that I wrote about my gym class in 11th grade

In Lander’s Fields

 

In Lander’s fields the shrubs do grow

with stoners smoking, row by row

the wooden fort lies deep within

It’s awesomeness should be a sin

 

We are the out of shape students who

love our fort and forest through and through

We watch the hawks eat squirrels and stuff

I guess for them things must be rough

 

We brave the landscape, enjoy the view

look up above at skies of blue

In this forest there’s so much to do,

here in Lander’s fields

 

And when we leave and go back home

we often think of this biome

and wait till we go back to our zone,

here in Lander’s fields.

Author's Note

Feel free to tear this poem apart, or say something nice about it. Tell me what you think about it.

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Reviews

[Emily]

I really like this one!
The first line really pulled me in!
Well done!

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!