I'll Rage On

A poem about a young adult full of rage at a world filled with hatred.

I’ll Rage On

 

I’ll rage on through the blood and the tears

Rage that burns through my all pain, fury that cuts through any sadness

 

Drying my tears with the flames of hatred, fighting forever

I rage on

 

I’ll rage on through the evil people with intent to kill

 Through those who think they are better than me

Through the unacceptable times my soul has been wrecked to s**t

 

Countless times people kicked me while I was down

Do I look back? Never

I rage on

 

I’ll rage on through this frigid world, where cold people with steel hearts beat down on each other, in a frozen wasteland of despair, without love or mercy. Yet they still ask for a helping hand after all the pain they’ve caused

 

I’m unable to accept a world that is full of hate, which fuels my own hatred, creating a cycle of bloodshed that will always continue

I rage on

 

I walk through the hatred, my rage swallowing the pain. I learn from this world of sorrow, and now I’m going insane. I don't want to be here anymore. In my padded cell, I rage on, hoping somebody will hear me. But would that change anything?

 

 

Author's Note

Please tell me think of this poem. Whether you think it's good, bad, or have any ideas to make it better, I'd like to hear about your opinion.

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Kat69]

It is a really good poem. I can feel the pain and anger that you are writing about. it is very believable and heartfelt.

[Ardra]

I’ll rage on through this frigid world, where cold people with steel hearts beat down on each other, in a frozen wasteland of despair, without love or mercy. Yet they still ask for a helping hand after all the pain they’ve caused

I could relate to the above lines....nicely done

[Zoya]

Your fury is felt here! I love the way how you've repeated the words 'I rage on'; that makes it more powerful. A passionate write!

[Bear]

deep concept using rage and sadness as the catalyst to emotional stability. To often we are self absorbed and feel with our mind, think with our heart leaving our souls void of identity is it any wonder so many are lost within them self? I am going to be thinking about this poem for days and I love when something I read makes me think and the deeper it makes me think the better I like it, inspiration will come from all the thinking you are going to make me do and I thank you for it. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Najam Us Saher]

I didn't expect that ending. Very correctly expressed your concern and rage. I liked it. Well done.