A Rhyme of Gods

This is some of my newer work. From this point on, everything is fresh from my mind. I call this a rhyme poem. Where the purpose of the poem is to paint a picture out of descriptive rhymes. Enjoy!

An individual's primitive synergy equilibrium imitates misery indignity wintering infinitely

Cynical biblical sigilstone of a clover’s notes dot the meadow of mechanical mandibles melodious

Forests fornicate discoordinated morbid torture smorgasbord overlord cannibal antidote comatose phobia

Gluttonous Goliath dwindled resilience stillness in the cold fridge of divinity

Atmokinesis onomatopoeia intervenous double helixes resurrected the deathless effigy of a phoenix and resuscitate blessing Jesus Nephilim and Mohamad androgynous monoliths the faucets of animosities blossoming droplets of Holocaust

Mysterious ellipsis transmitting deciduous bickering stifling beginning the end of damnation decrypted deception weaponizing violin hymens cyanide driving  bicycle bipedal bipolar disorder sorrow burrows purchase murder further wording burgling sterling silver wilderness Beelzebub amphibian privilege Merkabah misanthropist meandering Neanderthal following flowering Solomon satisfied satellite cyphers cathedral primeval beaver weaving cleavers bulimic nihilistic materialist mannerisms shiver in cold prisms if rainbow abyssal visions stained glass pacific pacifist mythical mysticism blemishing heaven, blistering limbo symbolling kindling windowpanes  Mesopotamian remaining an eye inside the mind blind of Cypresses, especially Maleficent death sentencing praying mantises prancing dandelions and daffodil killers willpower Pricilla devours all primordial tormentor classic Jurassic masochist masturbation pronunciated sating satiating recreational safe havens for hatred escaping excavating nations of death Nephilim supple muppet Snuffleupagus utterance brotherhood

Visionary’s apothecary terraforming horrors exorbitant, morose corrosion exploding carbonating commensurate commonplace coordinators raiding proclamations satanistic syllabus intimate dissonance promised communism vaulted Valhalla discombobulated homonyms regurgitated regulated debating patristic patronage irrigation osculating mayhem mafia Apocrypha subcontinent ocarina oculi ocular monolithic opportunistic manuscript obituary marauding fauna sprawling spatulas Galactica

Anomaly zoology lobotomy photonics rock bottom suboptimal velociraptor contraptions snap like synapses avalanching branch past my anatomy answering my insanity

Elaborate my calibrations dabbling with cadaver masterpieces racing through space and trachea vaporized homo-sapien nations elevate the elasticity castaway castle castrations renaming the equations that multiplied alive and sanctified me a colony in my colonoscopy molten morphine genes collapsing in the lactose free lactating lap of saturated luxury listening listeria etherized paradise climbing bison writing lightning revitalizing revivified revelation revival tribalism continual subliminal obligation remaking obliterating

Diverse inertia, sap diversion dilapidated captivation, Ifrit Phoenix philosophic venus, Saturn patterned mars centennial centaurs, sentiment Pluto central communal moon strudel strutting consumption suction uppercut peanuts in your Uranus contagious earthquake reincarnate Mother Nature

I feel unclean cavaliering cavities adversity trampolined in demented dreaming eccentric uncomprehensive  Neverland humanity opposition twisted into position riffling obsidian sifting vestigial messiah messengers atherosclerosis varicose choked windpipes of ripe Armageddon-like strife acolytes rewriting life paraphernalia paraphrasing the amazing communication extravaganza ravaging planet extermination seismic sobriety offbeat distancing fantasy from the make-believe seas of school shooting moonbeams bleeding submarine warheads dreading domination, expedited silence before being dropped on the apocalypse paradoxical popsicle in hell’s hospitable psychotropic tropical optical illusion of grandeur blooming macabre on the earth like a dead man’s birth

Pathetically poetic antiseptic vessels of amnestic blessing empowering Allah photography diagnostics apostles to a fossilized apocalypse

Disembarking into anarchy, a facade homage, a broken god Yahweh

Calling upon me, to shamanize the harmony dissolving sovereignty of earth-sky apartheid, an army of Buddha carvings marching through Shinto virginity vicinity initiating in the proclamation of creation

To be a man among god’s, and see god amongst man

Even as only a pawn in the palm of his hand

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[HB Rita]

Wait wait wait! At first as i was reading, i thought it is a rap composition! As i continuously reading, I felt it;s very exceptional poem and the words are from another world. Very higher dimensional thought was put in to this poem. IT is probably all about Christianity and GOD. I am still holding my breath to understand the whole concept. I am stupid..........

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Sorry it took so long to get back to you. I’m just so happy that you enjoyed it. May Allah bless you!

[Bryad Polis Valentino]

So utterly disappointing. Lots of Christian garbage, the writing reveals little knowledge of paganism.

I thought it was good, however, composition. Young one, I know the ways of the witch...I could show them to you one day...You could be mine, I could be yours, and then there could be two...

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I read some of your poems, seems you like the darker stuff. If you want we could collab on a poem. I have a few dark poems here and there.

[Pete]

certainly a write from another world. you've got quite a vivid imagination. there is always so much going on. this one no exception, jam-packed with action and imagery of a higher dimension. have to stop and catch my breath and gather my thoughts after each line. clearly inspired by the gods. i love the power and emotion from alliteration. i also like how you use words off the beaten path. wow and awesome pics too ... :)

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you so much Pete! There's something beautiful about reading or writing rhyme after rhyme that fall into themselves like a spiral. Recently, I tried to emulate that as closely as possible. There are around 20 poems that I have that share the style of what I call the "rhyme poem", but every one of them is different. Expect to see more soon. I also will be writing more of these, as they stimulate my mind and are pure fun. I cannot think of a better way to view paradise than through the words, rhymes, and in some cases metaphors, that we all share on this site. People like you inspire me. And your praise just makes me even more excited for the next poem.