Mold A Story

A poem made purely of rhymes.

Mold a great story from my flesh, and shackle the rancid rasping pacifistic blood in the iron ore of tomorrow, of apothecary apartheid apocalypse obsolete obelisks, gobbling my diseased disastrous dissolving prominence, promising solitude dilapidated mass created masquerading barbecue of marbled living masonry decay, jaded bricks of fixated bone, skin spit and tissue, mullets bulimic buffet of greasy graves and enslaved sanctuary for insulated insanity emancipation, incinerating flaming uncontaining in the hatred, mulberry terrorists, chariots of indominating abominations called crusaders, an appetite for righteousness, through violence, like a rising sun above the cyanide adrenaline adrift

 

An individual’s primitive synergy misery indignity wintering engulfed in the wallowing walts of weeping willow wisp gypsy’s indifference insidious

Cynical biblical sigil stone clover notes undertoe grandiose comatose come forth

Mold a story from my spiritual miracle

Through morbid torture smorgasbord overlord cannibal rambles unravelling in the tangles of the evangelical

Gluttonous Goliath of cyclops nocturne

Atmokinesis antithesis seizures unbelieving weaving breathing concealed demons elitist refiguration of a religion’s condemnations condensation , constellations of clouded soundless creation

Mysterious ellipsis transmitting deciduous bickering stifling beginning the end of damnation decrypted deception weaponizing violin hymens cyanide driving bicycle bipedal bipolar disorder sorrow burrows purchase murder further wording burgling sterling silver wilderness Beelzebub amphibian privilege Merkabah misanthropist meandering Neanderthal following flowering Solomon satisfied satellite cyphers cathedral primeval beaver weaving cleavers bulimic nihilistic materialist mannerisms shiver in cold prisms of rainbow abyssal visions stained glass pacific pacifist mythical mysticism blemishing heaven, blistering limbo symbolling kindling windowpanes  Mesopotamian remaining an eye inside the mind blinded by Cypresses, especially maleficent death sentencing praying mantises prancing dandelions and daffodil killers willpower Pricilla devours all silicon primordial tormentor classic Jurassic masochist masturbation pronounciated sating satiating recreational safe havens for hatred escaping excavating nations of death Nephilim supple Muppet snojfolofagous utterance a motherless brotherhood

Mold a story from my inglorious forgeries euphoria

Visionary’s apothecary terraforming horrors exorbitant, morose code corrosion exploding corroborating commensurate commonplace coordinators raiding proclamations shamanistic syllabus intimate dissonance promised communism vaulted Valhalla discombobulated homonyms regurgitated regulated Satanism debating patristic patronage irrigation opiating mayhem mafia apocrypha subcontinent ocarina oculi ocular monolithic opportunistic manuscript obituary marauding fauna spatulas galactica

Anomaly zoology lobotomy photonics rock bottom suboptimal velociraptor contraptions snap like synapses avalanching branches past my anatomy answering my insanity

Mold a story from a cornucopia of dystopian unicorn

Elaborate my calibrations dabbling with cadaver masterpieces racing through space and trachea vaporized homo-sapien nations elevate the elasticity castaway castle castrations renaming the equations that multiplied alive and sanctified me a colony in my colonoscopy molten democracy morpheme genes collapsing in the lactose free lactating lap of luxury listening listeria etherized paradise climbing bison writing lightning revitalizing revivified revelation revival tribalism continual subliminal obligation remaking obliterating

Diverse inertia, diversion dilapidated captivation, Ifrit Phoenix philosophic Venus, Saturn patterned Mars centennial centaurs, sentiment Pluto central communal moon strudel strutting consumption suction uppercut peanuts in your Uranus contagious earthquake reincarnate Mother Nature awakened

I feel unclean cavaliering cavities adversity trampolined in demented dreaming eccentric uncomprehensive  Neverland humanity’s opposition twisted into position riffling obsidian sifting vestigial messiah messengers atherosclerosis varicose choked windpipes of ripe Armageddon-like strife acolytes rewriting life paraphernalia paraphrasing the amazing communication extravaganza ravaging planet extermination seismic sobriety offbeat distancing fantasy from the make believe seas of school shooting moonbeams bleeding submarine warheads dreading domination, expedited silence before being dropped on the apocalypse paradoxical popsicle in hell’s hospitable psychotropic tropical optical illusion of grandeur blooming macabre on the earth like a dead man’s birth

Pathetically poetic, the words currents assurance reimburses our worthlessness, resurrect the letters and pepper my Kevlar with a centrepiece of steel phoenix into my double helix elixirs flittering lithium visionaries perishing aviary

Disembarking into carnival anarchy, a carnivorous facade homage, discarding a devils bargain in the carnage, of a broken god, a dystopian bond that covers my sunburns like armour embargo in the bombardment

The heartbeat unstopping, in the doppleganger hangnails of fragile vagrants homo-sapien

Mold a great story from my metamorphosis, from every pore on my ocean’s shore, orifices coursing like sorcery cloaca earthquake left in the wake of creation

 

Mold a great story, forge glory from the flourish of my heart of gold

Mold a great story from the fields of a world’s meadow unknown

Resurrecting effigies in the pledge of a cemetery

Mold ebony from the bones and geometric gemstones of unfolded dimensions of centuries, grow

 

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Ghost writer]

It seemed to me that you just rattled off words that rhymed with out real base or inspiration, you did kind of say you were going to do that in the description but I don't find that very enjoyable, even if the rhymes are good.

[Pete]

my oh my. whenever i read your work i have to stop and catch my breath. there's so much going on. its like racing at 90 miles/hour. you certainly have an active, creative mind. you have a vast vocabulary and are not afraid to let it loose ... :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I agree with Hayley although you have some amazing passages and alliteration and the burried concept feels deep and intellegent. There is some facinating descriptive stuff here. In such alengthy piece it does get lost without a skeletal structure for the reader to make out in the mist.

[Hayley]

Hey there, thanks for sharing! I have a question about this, and really all your writing in general. I know that you've got a style that you're comfortable with, and that's great, I like seeing where your mind takes you. However, I worry that other readers will get lost in this -- I know I certainly do at times. Feel free to take this with a grain of salt, but you may be using too many adjectives, and then it just spirals into something that is very confusing to interpret. Maybe there is no real interpretation, I don't know. Just some thoughts :)

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I understand, I’ll try to have more of a story to the poem. Just needed to test my rhyming skills.

[Hayley]

Cool, that sounds great! I didn't mean to be overly critical or anything.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

No, your criticism is much needed. Thank you for sharing your viewpoint, it will help me improve!