I

I wrote this poem while away from home. I'm happy with the result.

I

Biomechanical Albion

Symbiotic sovereignties androgynous

Bottomless marionette recollections

Chasing the weaponized perfections exoskeleton

Melancholy like the hill of umbilical cords not even born

Etherial onomatopoeia

Of infatuated Cleopatra

Immaculately sacrificial

Promiscuous ventriloquist

Pulling the strings of death-bringers soliloquy

Shadowed by hallelujah shrouded Gilgamesh

Of Armageddons methamphetamine anagram anthologies

Of celestial amnestics

Reflecting on the resurrection of renegade hatred

In a ruthless plague of rag-dolls

Of acupuncturist homunculi

Of pushpin vigilante incubator

Of Mother Nature’s glacier

Irrigated marionettes pirouette the stumbling jugular

Voluptuous stomach mumbling annunciations

Gluttony insufferable in the undertow of pheromones

Comatose to the motion of the waves

That braid the fluctuations of fluorescent ectoplasmic spectres

From the wreckage of endocrine

Beneath the surface of the epidermis

Surgical splurging of spliced glucagon

Rifling psychically intertwining rhymes

Unwinding Frankenstein serpentine alignment

Of skyscrapers

On the pondering mitochondria’s hell-spawn legato

Monotonous to the triceratops apocalypse

Of oculus rift bliss of virtuoso

Aloaca shapeshifting the Big Dipper’s omnipotence

Homonyms fondling kilometres

Of augmenting cemetery chariots

To malaria’s hysterically paradoxical helicopters

Dropping the words like flies

Regurgitated psychotropic velociraptors

Telepathic synapses

Capturer of absentminded sciences

Writhing through the cytoplasm

Of clementines made the schizophrenic endeavour

Of the ecliptic renaissance of tonsillitis

Like a tidal fire hydrant of wyvern’s livelihood

Of diaphragms flamboyant recoil

And ricochet rhythmic primitive aneurisms

Of inhibition’s prism vivid lividity prison of tranquillity

Take quill quelling melodies from melancholy conduits

Of the clockwork of my van-ocular vernacular

I harbour my doubts

Cry myself a river

Waiting to set sail, a vessel

And anchor in a sanctuary of my soul

In a watery grave like buried treasure,

Where I can drown my sorrow, in my reflection

Like a fish out of water

A disembodied monster of frenzied energy,

Possessing consciousness,

A battle cry to be exorcised, purified immaterial

I

Am no longer just a cage called a cell

Though the apple of the I doesn't fall far from the tree

I am more than just the sum of my partisans

I am more than the depths of my negligence, under bodies of water made flesh castaways

Holding on to life's roots like decapitated asterisks a raft isolated on the endless pale void page

I am the embodiment of free will imprisoned within myself to explore the world discharged from the wombs asylum

When I'm on borrowed time, should I not take every minute, your second guessing?

Resting my wary I, the retina is just another looking glass in a cathedral of sunlight and long cascading shadows

In a blink of an I, and the eternity of us is the homage of life's kaleidoscope, and city of colour 

I am therefore I am, or rather, through us, have become

I

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Lyanth]

If Eminem was a poet...
I don't usually enjoy these types of abstract forms of poetry, especially this long, but I can't say I've come across something quite like this piece and it had me there til the end.
It was actually quite interesting and had a good flow.
The only thing I would say the big paragraph you might want to break that up maybe in half to make it easier to read.
That was a lot of of intense syllables for just one straight paragraph.
Overall though I really liked , agree with the rest, would love to hear it as a spoken word. Do definitely share it wherever you can so others can Enjoy it too.
Good job.
Lyanth. (But you already knew that.)

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I’m really happy to hear such a complement. I’m always trying to create great poetry that could be combined with flow. There will be more like this as I grow as a writer, and plenty that I’ve written already. Completely baffled that people are giving me such compliments though. I’ll be sure to check your work out as well, and send you a friend request. Happy to share my friend. :)

[DAH]

This wants to be read out loud at a Slam. It's dying for a live audience, really!
Surreal, abstract, and real ...

Bravo!
DAH

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I planned to go to a major poetry slam to show this off, but I made some plans so I'll have to hit it later. But when I do, this will likely be one of the poems I'll be sharing.

I'm happy to know it's slam material, that boosts my confidence! Thank you for reading.

[DAH]

Yes! And, like a song writer/singer, memorize it and recite with out looking at it. Good Job!

[Ghost writer]

I really like the melancholy and monstrous feel of this one, I like how when you said I it didn't always fit in the right way, it added to the depth of the piece.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I glad you enjoyed the themes and emotions, I'll definitely be back with more later on!

[Pete]

whew. i always have to catch my breath after reading you. this one no exception. you have a knack for putting words together that would never even belong near each other and making it work to paint the twisted tapestry of your other dimensions. thanks for the ride ... :)

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thanks for reading, I'll try my best to continue to making jaw dropping poems. You and everyone else who reads my work is part of the fun of writing.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This style of writing seems new ton me but it's really amazing anyway and It's words are beautifully structured. I like it.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you Kay! I’m glad you like my style. I’ll send you a friend request and review a poem or two when I can.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you. R.J

[wordman]

great imagery and writing style,write on mr poe

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I will indeed my friend!

[Robert Trakofler]

if you can rap these wraps I think you would sing a masterpiece of thought flow down sweet and low flow with a crescendo leaving an echo of your resolute revolution rambling throw up Picasso poetry who did those last 3 images I cant read the name im old and blind but they are fantastic expressions with awesome use of color. sorry took so long to review i must of read this 20 times

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

I plan to rap these wraps soon, my bunny friend. At a poetry slam, in a few days. I'll let you know how it goes. I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading my work. Especially since I look up to you as a fellow wordsmith intertwined with rhyme.