Black Sunrise (Metallica)

I poem I put together. Enjoy.

The voice in my head may speak if it wishes;

It is simply a mouth without teeth; a demon without fangs

And I know a demon by its cry to be exorcised

An exiled live-wire baptized by hellfire

 

I can’t think straight as an arrow because life gave me a curveball

A hearty meal is not a soul

I’ve got an open mind of psychosomatic aneurisms

I’m a heartless person, just needed to get that off my chest

The night sky is my shadow

The clouds my silver shroud

The stars my silhouette

My soul a sunset

The dawn my life

The moon my spirit

The sun my light,

Daydreams my lyrics

The day my night

The black my white

The endeavour my nemesis

My reflection a requiem heavily medicated

My love my confession

Interconnected conceptions, recklessly apprehended

A hollow embassy of words, spit from obituary’s curse

Each stanza a hearse masqueraded abominations

Castrated massacres, murderers’ emperor, devil’s sentencing, full-on emptiness alone,

A game of incomprehensive thrones

Four horsemen vainglorious phantasmagoric metamorphosis reborn

Metaphorical oracles voracious soul a miracle

Upon the dawn yawning ominous bottomless unanimous patterns scavenger of an avenger

Gladiator of words eradication unpurged re-emerging insurgency’s currents surgical purgatory

Serpentine divine, lifelike divide, black sunrise, axe undying, outcast leviathan, stained-glass ivory, hot iron lioness, beguiled annihilation

It may be a dog eat dog world, but bloodthirsty people

Can eat their heart out for a walk

But even if they're all bark, I won't bite

I've got this world on a tight leash

Hanging from a slipknot

Wingspan of an eclipsed thought

Apocalyptic antithesis

Insidious ricochet of the princely photosynthesis of deciduous incubus of spriggan chanting

Infinity's ramblings, obsidian calamity, amaryllis amulets, Metallica dangling, Beelzebub's sanity, strangling Neanderthals

Mangled diabolical

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Bird]

Nice poem! Nice word choice.

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thank you.