White World (Among Other Poems)

White World (Among Other Poems)

A Poem by R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
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Another bunch of really short poems, and a medium-sized one. Love and soul was put into making these. Maybe even more so than the adoration I usually ride off of, hovering off the thermals.

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(Winter Poem) White World

Perforated hatred are the stars in the cardboard sky

Under the wallpaper of daylight

Tearing down our house of cards

Little paper cuts can rip you to shreds

Your disembowelled body the confetti before the show starts

But you are not a star

You are not a helicopter

You are not s**t

Your skin is paper-thin

You are no book

You are just a poem scraped together

Just another silent anthem

From an unknown voice

In a crowded choir

On the doorstep of a white world



(Death Chant) Void

The shattered form of cartilage is sculpting an effigy for God

Because God is dead

Man made their own God

Because Man is Blind

Blind people are visionaries

Because they see no evil

Eyes are divinity

Because insight is knowledge

If my glass eyes of flat affect are prisms for light

Because I want to be seen as I am

Maybe I could shatter God

Because God has never been broken

Maybe God is ripped apart like an open chest devoid of treasures

Because that void is forever

And God understands pain, his heart is human, and ours, a void



Wax Nebula

On the doorstep of a white world

The shattered form of cartilage is sculpting an effigy for God

In a crowded choir

Because God is dead

From an unknown voice

Man made their own God

Just another silent anthem

Because Man is Blind

You are just a poem scraped together

Blind people are visionaries

You are no book

Because they see no evil

Your skin is paper-thin

Eyes are divinity

You are not s**t

 



Because insight is knowledge

You are not a helicopter

If my glass eyes of flat affect are prisms for light

But you are not a star

Because I want to be seen as I am

Your disembowelled body the confetti before the show starts

Maybe I could shatter God

Little paper cuts can rip you to shreds

Because God has never been broken

Tearing down our house of cards

Maybe God is ripped apart like an open chest devoid of treasures

Under the wallpaper of daylight

Because that void is forever

Perforated hatred are the stars in the cardboard sky

And God understands pain, his heart is human, and ours, a void




Sometimes this asylum is so temporary that the madness feels eternal

Because heaven is a graveyard for fallen angels

The world is an eye blinking out of existence

You are not real

We are as abstract as a dream and as surreal as a painting

Because Hell is the etherial plane of astral Capricorns projecting resurrection

Maybe we made our own form of emptiness and called it something

If words are constructed from the sole, hearts of a symphony

At least we have orchestrated our voice

Because I'd rather we echo through all the silence

Enough for nothing to be worth everything we are

And the white void of a dark world, worn like a monochromatic suit

Isn't colour blind

Because of shadow and shade, shards of light, malachite

Shines silver intertwined in rhinestone rhymes chimera




God

And your love is vicarious, even if

I'm imagining it, playing with words

Because you are my God





© 2019 R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)


Author's Note

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

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Mr Potato yesterday a line came to mind... in life I am constantly running from divinity but when I am reading I am chasing divinity and when I am writing I am listening to divinity dont know where the thought came from but as I reread your poem grouping the thought comes back to the forefront. You slip some interesting inferences into some of these metaphors in your pennings and a nice bit of imagery to your thought flows.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You are wrong I'm total s**t. I drink every day. But at least i don't look like a dude who got blue balled from a fat girl

Posted 4 Years Ago


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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

I don't know how to respond to that honestly. Don't understand how that has anything to do with the .. read more
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4 Years Ago

May I interrupt? That doesn't sounds like a review.
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I didn't read this one before since I am more into your complex poems, I kept this one for later.This is a nice collection of little poems in fact making out complex meanings through easy words, that takes skill you know. ;)


Posted 4 Years Ago


R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Thanks Aurora! :)
I like the opening to "God" - "your love is vicarious" - really interesting concept. I am confused by the repetition of several of the lines, though.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading.

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

Burlington, Halton, Canada



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