Naive Promise

Naive Promise

A Poem by SinnerInspired
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do not enjoy,...it doesn't matter Just read at least it doesn't rhyme but it means a lot

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I questioned myself all through the night.
Why every tear was for you.
Why your confession hurt so much.
i see what we are both capable of.
I know now, once the sun woke up, that we were& that we are never ending.
We were just barely starting to become familiar.
You didn't lie, my imagination got the best of me. 
It was barely the beginning.
I remember what it's like to feel that way.
I am sorry& I don't care if you never mean anything you tell me.
I am sorry I didn't know before.
Before I got so caught up into liking you.
I'm gonna help you, whether you like it or not.
I won't let you feel alone, well I want you to at least feel a sense of care.
Once you feel that, I will leave your life.
You'll be much happier.
I promise you.
Once you feel I will leave.
I will accomplish this before I die.
All my efforts will not go to waste.
I promise to keep you safe, 
I promise to care for you,
I promise to get back up every time you reject me.
I won't give up on you.
On the one person I love the most.
I promise an almost naive promise.

© 2013 SinnerInspired


Author's Note

SinnerInspired
non-rhyming poem
this is an actual promise, an oath I've decided to make...

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even without any rhyming scheme this poem speaks to my heart... the beautiful unconditional true passion you have left here is amazing to read.... i loved the honesty in your words.... thought provoking write.... full ratings!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on June 13, 2013
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SinnerInspired
SinnerInspired

Mid-City, CA



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Hey im SinnerInspired im a poet Im not that good not that bad. I like writing, a lot! Message me if you'd like. Sorry if I don't get to all the read requests. But i'll try to get to each one as soon a.. more..

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