Immigrant Song

The title is from one of the songs from one of my favorite bands Led Zeppelin

I saw the sun As the sun begun

The guitar began its solo As I walked on the cracked tile floor

Beating drums echoed in my ear Things began to be clear

The bass followed behind The truth I started to find

That's when the singer put it together Now I can remember

How the leaves started to fall Desperate voices started to call

Shouting& screaming Words of meaning

Gone with the wind Die with a grin

Look up at the stars Feel like your in mars

Struggling for air No one helps cause no one cares

Rest in peace Love is what you need

Send my prayers up to god Trust is gained not bought

In life you gotta learn Some people are full of dirt

We learn from the good& from the bad You can either chose to be happy or sad

Don't let life bring you down Make your own sound

Sing along Or write your own song

Be a leader Or be a follower

Laugh at life with a smile on your face

Sooner or later you'll find a way out of this maze

Author's Note

Hope you guys comment on it whether its good or bad

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An exceptional piece,
and so meaningful, use of analogies skillfully done...
I love this poem.

Superb :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Immigrant songs are many. I did like this song. I believe we are all immigrants at one time. I don't know why we are hard on people searching for hope and chance. I like the strong ending to the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote