Lost Brother

Lost Brother

A Poem by Sir Joseph
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The first of many

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You trusted me with everything;

You trusted me with your all.

You made me a fortitude,

A place without the walls.


You helped me with my troubles;

You helped me to stop the show.

You gave me a place to stay,

When I had nowhere to go.


We began to grow closer;

You started calling me your brother.

My family adopted you in,

You called my mom your mother.


Then I broke the trust;

I broke it with my sin.

I shattered everything,

With the things I had hidden.


You've heard enough I know;

So I shall stop talking.

Meaningless words will cease,

As I start by walking.


My heart is heavy; 

I can write no more.

My prayer I pray,

Our friendship be restored.

© 2013 Sir Joseph


Author's Note

Sir Joseph
This is the first of probably many dealing with my regret and losing a friend that was a brother.

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THis is very sad indeed. I hope eventually things turn out well for you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. How is the composition of the piece?
Marie

8 Years Ago

It isn't terrible. But it isn't as good as it could be. If you're writing this sort of veryse, you h.. read more
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Ahhh thank you so much! I will try to work on it for future writes!
it happens....i lost a friend of 40 years to a betrayal..an unforgivable one. life simply goes on. nicely expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
It flows really nice, I can feel your regret especially in the last stanza. Sometimes we get hurt more with people closer to us, but perhaps with time he will forgive and become a friend again.

Good Job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

My prayer is he does. And thank you for the review
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Glad you liked it:)
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, sometimes people just need time and know that you are truly sorry...but idk
beautiful....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
keyvan

8 Years Ago

your welcome

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