A Painful Break Up

A Painful Break Up

A Poem by Sir Joseph
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A Got hungry and wrote this haha

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Oh Dorritos locos tacos,
You taunt me with flavor.
With your crisp crunch,
And cheese to savor.

Oh how you mish and mash,
Yet your flavors combine.
You make me crave you,
A heavenly taste sublime.

Your price is affordable,
Even for such as I.
Drawing crowds of all kinds,
Not just average guys.

Alas you have lied to me,
Claimed to be real.
You say you are Mexican,
But the truth is concealed.

You are a gringo!
A impostor in disguise!
Show me the real food,
Or kiss my money goodbye.

Your pictures lie to me!
They play you up!
Showing contents overflowing!
Yet its only a fourth a cup!?

You have deceived me,
And broken my trust.
This cuts deep,
Thus the big fuss!

Why cant you be,
Just what you claim.
If you just were,
My order would remain.

We are through,
You and I.
You will hurt me no more.
This is Goodbye.

© 2013 Sir Joseph


Author's Note

Sir Joseph
Just got bored and hungry haha and i hate how the advertisements for food is..

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:) engaging piece of work and yes it does bring out smile. liked it .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sounds like you had a bad case of the munchies and got an entertaining write out of it, very clever, abhor false advertising too, tacos, I meant kudos!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thanks! haha also sorry i havent read any of your r/r yet... i havent been able to get on in a while.. read more
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Ha tell me about it, I have been on and I've got upward of 70, no problemo! Not going anywhere, and.. read more
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Okie dokie! :)
add a little salsa, a shot of tequila and couple of xx and i am game
otherwise i agree, cute poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


HAHAHA! What a fun poem. It is sort of like a bag of chips really, it's like thank you for selling me a bag that is 85% air.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thanks :) haha i know right?! Im like are you serious??
Hmm i am craving for tacos love this poem it is vibrant and quirky love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Thanks! haha i got hungry and saw a taco bell commercial so yeah haha
Now you've made me hungry.
I don't believe advertisements...they are geared only for manipulation...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Haha I'm sorry! Yeah, they are a real let down.
haha food always seems to look better on advertisements than in real life...it is a disappointment at times, but fast food isn't good for you anyway xD just make your own taco and all is well...solves boredom and hunger unless the person is lazy lol

Good Job :p

Posted 8 Years Ago


~*~Peace Keeper~*~

8 Years Ago

haha nooooo
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Yeeeessssss lol
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

8 Years Ago

xD NUUUUUU
Haha! That is amazing :'D!!
You made me hungry lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


StayAnchored

8 Years Ago

Haha! I wish I was strong lol :)
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

haha :P
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

lol
lol:) still laughing:) loved the piece:) its very amusing:) great job sweety:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

yeah:) i still have this big goofy grin on my face:)lol
Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

Hee hee hee :)
marie

8 Years Ago

:)
aahhh don't say good bye at least not until you try the new cool ranch doritos loco tacos*)*)*) they to skimp on the good stuff
this is very cute but now you made me hungry with or without all the good stuff
and yes the advertisements take us for a ride but so do poem titles*)*)
thank you so for sharing your creative and fun to read write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

8 Years Ago

I thought it would be a nice and funny little title lol but the picture gives it away lol well the p.. read more

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Added on April 3, 2013
Last Updated on April 3, 2013
Tags: Tacos, Doritos, Breakup

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Sir Joseph

Laurel, MS



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