Who Says?

Who Says?

A Poem by Dreamer
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Basically a bunch of questions I ask myself..

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Who says?...

That I can't break free from who I used to be?

That I can't change the world?

That I can't get stoned?

That I can't be paranoid?

That I can't live without you?

That i can't scream at the top of my lungs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do they know?

I'll show them all,

because I can do whatever I want...just watch me.

© 2013 Dreamer


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Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:



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I can relate to this, this was powerful and beautiful (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

I add it to my favorites :D
Dreamer

10 Years Ago

awesome :D
BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

Haha no problem!:)
Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:
Be you, aslong as you know the difference
between right and wrong. Follow your heart
great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review
Great a battle cry. Be yourself that is the best you can ever be.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Why thank you (:
Patrick O'Neil

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Dreamer

10 Years Ago

I appreciate it greatly
Great stuff! Emotional and honest. Fantastic!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate it (:
Loved it. I remember feeling like that in my late teenage years, well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jake!
inspirational type of writing, you can do anything id you set your mind to it! great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! (:
Quiet Child

10 Years Ago

welcome kiddo! (:
Dreamer

10 Years Ago

:D.............
Look out world, here you come! :) Very empowering words. Good one. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

Why thank you very much! I appreciate you reading it and taking the time to review it.
I got your back be sure of that. You are breathing fire. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

thank you pete!

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Added on September 23, 2013
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Dreamer
Dreamer

Jackson, OH



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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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