Can't help myself

 

 

I shouldn't feel this way,

not after the way you hurt me and tore me in two....

but I can't help myself..,

in loving you <3

 

Reviews

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Reminds me of Sharon back from 3rd grade. I never did find out who she was, not really. And although she was mean and cruel to me, she always held my hand while she did it, and that meant more to me than anything else in the world at the time.

So sorry you were hurt. The problem with 'opening up' is it lowers the normal defenses we have, and leaves our heart 'open' to injury. We TRUST others, and when that trust is betrayed is when it can hurt the most.

Hang in there, Dreamer ... :)
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[Dreamer]

thanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.
I'm hanging in there the best I can...
read morethanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.
I'm hanging in there the best I can...

what's the link on your review?

[dw817]

Oof. You hit the "read more" error in Writer's Cafe. It's always a good idea to re-load the page and see if your entire message was sent, if not, you can either delete your previous post and try again making sure not to use the ":" in your text, or - just add text beneath it.

While I am immensely fond of Writer's Cafe and it's interface, the few simple questions I have asked staff truly remain unanswered to this day - so I can only offer kludges to get around their glitches.

[Dreamer]

oops I seen that...thanks for the suggestion.

[BubblingMe]

Wo sad, with tears in my eyes I read this, but beautiful!

[Dreamer]

thank you very much (:

[Patrick O'Neil]

Great write, nice rhyme and rhythm, short, touching and true.

[Dreamer]

thank you very much (:

[David]

that was very nice and creative great job :P

[Dreamer]

I appreciate it, Ryan (:

[David]

you're welcome lol you earned it

[Dreamer]

:D...................

[Coyote Poetry]

Love take us to good and bad places. Can't forget the people we had loved even after they have broken our heart. A sad and powerful about the subject of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dreamer]

you're welcome! thank you very much for your review!

[Basu Gupta]

'I don't know how to appreciate that
Coz, i'm just speechless and out of words
You've a burning and intriguing talent
Which is very very rarely heard..'

Damn good poem..honoured reading it..thanks for sharing

[Dreamer]

Thanks for the review! I appreciate you reading it!!

[koty bell]

This was awesome hit home for me a bit..very similar to how im feeling right now :-( anyway greay write

[Dreamer]

Thank you for your review, Koty!
It's a sucky feeling, isn't it?
The best of luck!
-Katie

[koty bell]

Thx just broke up 3 or 4 days ago so wounds r still fresh..yes very sucky..thx no prob write was awesome

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Since you have written this...let me remind of a few songs which you might like to hear if you haven't heard already..."Make you feel my love" by Bob Dylan, "Still loving you" by Scorpions...you'll connect well with these...

[Dreamer]

thank you very much, I will check into them

[Quiet Child]

i know whoooo! you cant help the way you feel about others

[Dreamer]

yeah you do, and I know...I just need to know if he feels the same way!...

[Quiet Child]

only way to know is to ask

[Dreamer]

it's hard to do when we aren't allowed to speak to each other!!

[Quiet Child]

well you already have the solution by the screenshots i've seen.

[Dreamer]

yeah... but now he thinks its pointless cause of our parents. he's afraid that my dad will kill us...

[Quiet Child]

more or less kill him.

[Dreamer]

trust me.. that is an idea that has been in my head for years.

[Quiet Child]

Geezy petes!

[Dreamer]

what?
the thought of slitting his throat while he's sleeping has entered my mind quite often.

[Quiet Child]

do you have a complete understanding estimated amount of what you speak?

[Dreamer]

um... yea?

[Quiet Child]

so, so compelling... confusion is clouding your mind.

[Dreamer]

uh..no, pretty sure im not confused!

[Quiet Child]

hmm...........

[Dreamer]

hmmm?
.......

[Anand Sehgal]

we are sometimes undone by the amalgamated emotions ! good write

[Dreamer]

thank you very much!

[Laminators Dubai]

sure...even angels can't help while we are in love...I can tell B-)
its simple but amazing

[Dreamer]

thank you very much Glitch!