Once More

Song Idea I thought up in five minutes, tell me if you like :D

Once more I slam my door

Forget to sort my mental stability

Once more I hang my head

Over my bed, searching for more possibilites

 

So stand there, point the finger

Let the world see who you really are

Thats right, take off the mask,
you dont need it anymore

 

Whisper those sweet nothing into my ear

Make me feel like there was something real

Until the music fades

And I realize it wasnt real

 

I have stood here, standing my ground

Taken every blow you dished out

Waiting for something to break the edge

 

So stand there, point the finger

Let the world see who you really are

Thats right, take off that mask

you dont need it anymore

 

Why have you done this?

Stabbed my trust into my back

Ripped out my heart and burnt it to ash

 

Im through, no more games, I will strive to be the best I can

No future of mine holds you, no more

 

 

Reviews

[ocean_side]

I'd listen to a song with those lyrics for sure. Maybe some "aesthetic airbrushing" but it looks good.

[LL2]

I really like it. I would add an s onto nothing ->nothings.
Will there be a chorus?
Love the last two lines.
Would you review mine? http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/luckylifetwo/529960/