Miss Killer

Miss Killer

A Poem by Persona
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About Power

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Pedestrians watch, glued to the spot.

Miss Killer walks their street.
With a flick of her delicate wrist
she can throw a heavy weight against a building.

Strolling past, as if roaming through a field of flowers
Miss Killer flaunts her casual control.
Eyes follow her, people tense. 
Eyeing them back, next victim found.

Her space is respected, like Moses
dividing the crowds through the middle
without touch, can split a cheek in two.

Eyes dart to drivers,
wheels spin, panicked
pulling cars up vertically.

Her fist closes
The man inside screaming
clutching his seat
while Miss Killer, relaxing her arm
drops the car.

All jump back, shield themselves 
from shredded metal 
and bloody remains.

© 2014 Persona


Author's Note

Persona
Honest reviews please. I keep playing around with it but it's not up to the quality I'd like.

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After reading the title i thought of something a girl with killer looks who turns the heads around the street.. but this was totally unexpected- a blast of feminine power. Normally woman are regarded as weaker vessel.. But this poem empowers woman..

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persona

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sophy for reading.



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Gosh, it's like she's rolled in like a tornado or a hurricane!
Great write. :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


After reading the title i thought of something a girl with killer looks who turns the heads around the street.. but this was totally unexpected- a blast of feminine power. Normally woman are regarded as weaker vessel.. But this poem empowers woman..

~Sophy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persona

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sophy for reading.
Woah Really enjoyed reading this!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I am not sure how to take this one. Going to have to come back to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Persona

9 Years Ago

I definitely want help with it, so feel free to go for it x
Wow! I love this! :) Really great job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thank you Krista!
I like that you combined the whole feel of Skrillex and his work into the first few lines. The story fits really well with the feel of the music (I was listening to it as I was reading lol) and your idea is solid. Love that line "The Reason you live is because I control your movemets". Excellent! :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I hoped you'd like it
Emunah June.

11 Years Ago

I did very much so! :D

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Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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