Hawk Eye

Hawk Eye

A Poem by Sharon Kim

Hawk Eye

Freedom on the updrafts.

Spread my wings and soar.

 

Above my troubles and my worries,

They all seem small, insignificant.

 

I see the immenseness of the world

And recognize my place in it.

 

Nothing is handed out.

Narrowing my eyes, I dive

 

And go after what I want.

I will make the world mine.

© 2014 Sharon Kim


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Set goals and go for it. That's the ticket. You got it. Write down your goals and post where you can see daily.. Dash of your car. Great motivation piece which I think you were directed at yourself. Keep it up. Eye on the prize. But if I am not wrong you already have the prize with that little guy there with you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Absolutely on the goal setting. I need to stay focused! My little guy is just one of my prizes! I.. read more
Willard Wells

6 Years Ago

One turns deserves another.



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Set goals and go for it. That's the ticket. You got it. Write down your goals and post where you can see daily.. Dash of your car. Great motivation piece which I think you were directed at yourself. Keep it up. Eye on the prize. But if I am not wrong you already have the prize with that little guy there with you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Absolutely on the goal setting. I need to stay focused! My little guy is just one of my prizes! I.. read more
Willard Wells

6 Years Ago

One turns deserves another.
I really feel the need for success, this is a great perspective on life and reaching toward one's goals. "I will make the world mine." - such a strong ending line!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I think I wrote this to remind myself to go after my dreams and stop waiting for.. read more
The determination to soar and to become speaks loudly here. Great job!--Levi

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Levi!
I like the thoughts and the vision of the world.
"And go after what I want.
I will make the world mine."
Above lines I liked a lot. Would be cool to be a hawk. Few predators for the amazing bird. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and the kind words! I love to watch the hawks circle above the woods behind .. read more
I truly love the spirit of your poem. Admire the feel of such a strong write. Bravo!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and your kind words!
A. Amos

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome my friend
that's the spirit! soaring high among the clouds then diving to pounce on whatever pleases the eye.
nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

7 Years Ago

Thanks Woody!

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Added on July 10, 2014
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Tags: freedom, soaring, independence, declaration, strength

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Sharon Kim
Sharon Kim

Texas, GA



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