Rain

Rain

A Poem by Sharon Kim
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When the first drops fall

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Pit

Pit-pat-pit

Drops fall on dry earth

Nature’s musk scents the air

Breathe deeply, intoxicating

Rejuvenating, renewing

Raindrops

© 2014 Sharon Kim


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Sharon Kim
simple poem about rain; all comments welcome

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Such simplicity but the beauty in it is so much more. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words, Misha!
I like the description of rain. Rain does so much for us. The poem create good vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the reading! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Love it! I think you said that about mine that you reviewed, lol. But I do love rain. Each line of this short verse just tripped off of my tongue. It felt just like the experience of rain beginning, just as you meant your poem to be. I could even see the little puffs of dust as the droplets hit the parched patches of dirt in the grass.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! I'm so glad it came across like that. :)
I just love rain! This poem describes the beauty simply, yet eloquently!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you Briana!
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Ty
I love rain. You did great showing that freeing feeling of rain with so little.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you Ty!
Beautiful, insightful write on the Rain. Rain`s everyone`s favorite around the world so is its every spherical drop which brings the coldness on our surrounds .. to make us all cold and smiley with the blessings of nature. Wonderful Work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words!
I absolutely love this one! Despite its simplicity, it is beautifully written. I enjoy listening to the rain and the smell of the damp Earth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you Hayleigh. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love that earth smell too.
Moon

6 Years Ago

You are welcome
Rain is beautiful. A simple but effective poem. I wish it would rain now.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading! We've had clouds for three days, I wish it would rain and get it over with!
oh yes. how can we not love the rain? I love this little poem and the shape you've written it in.
a drop of rain!! clever.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon Kim

7 Years Ago

Thanks Woody! Glad you noticed the shape. :)
Woody

7 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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Added on July 15, 2014
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Sharon Kim

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