Can you guess what I am?

Can you guess what I am?

A Poem by Sunny Skye

Trees are used to see seas of blue

don't be suprised if your confused

I can see you can see me shine in the sky

you were suprised when i wouldn't die

 

I'm doomed for eternity I can't

be seen in the sun

that's the reason why 

I shine in the sunny days of

shining blue

 

I'm made of diamond rocks

 

Can you guess what I am?

 

I will go away if I scare you off

please forgive me if i won't turn you

into one.

 

I live a life where myths don't lie

I might be a monster but i won't

hurt you

 

your my sin while i came into

the sun

Trees are used to see seas of blue

Now you know why you were

confused

 

Myths are true believe it or not

now remember i might suck your blood.

© 2011 Sunny Skye


Author's Note

Sunny Skye
I'm a vampire Dah!!!

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Wow, I guessed vampire by th picture but when i started reading i was like, man, thats way to desriptive to be a vampire, but once i reached the last line i had to read it over knowing it was in fact one. haha. I really like this one

Posted 8 Years Ago


Best description of a vampire bite I have ever read. I like the detail and the repetition. A very good ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
"I'm doomed for eternity I can't
be seen in the sun
that's the reason why
I shine in the sunny days of
shining blue"
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well done, it took some time, but I got there in the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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