what you did

what you did

A Poem by Sunny Skye

I don't know what your doing to me

But it seems to work

Every time i see you

It' s hyptonizyng

 

 

I don't know what you did

But i believe i've got what i wanted

We are now together

But please don't let me go

 

It's a long way down

And i don't want to break

 

I don't know what you're doing to me

But please love me for ever

Please hold me for ever

 

If you let me

I will never let you go

I will always be here

 

Amd i know you will too.

 

I sit in my bed thinking of you

I never eat because

I'm dreaming of you

and when the next day comes

I'll i see is you

 

I don't know what you did to me

I never thought it will come to this

But if something happened to you

I will throw myself

off this roof

 

I will do anything for you

If I had to take a bullet fo you

I would.

 

I don't know what you did

But all I know is that I love

You with all my heart and soul

So, never let me go.

© 2012 Sunny Skye


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Sunny Skye
Hope you like it. It just came to me.

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in the first stanza: *hypnotizing
in the second stanza: "we are now together" sounds halting, almost robotic against the rest of the poem
i really like the feeling of the third stanza, and the poem in general.
in my opinion, you'll be a wonderful writer once you learn more about poetry and writing in general. improve your vocabulary and this could be great

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Its a long way down and i dont want to break...Excellent. Beautifully written piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

in the first stanza: *hypnotizing
in the second stanza: "we are now together" sounds halting, almost robotic against the rest of the poem
i really like the feeling of the third stanza, and the poem in general.
in my opinion, you'll be a wonderful writer once you learn more about poetry and writing in general. improve your vocabulary and this could be great

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful hopeful poem of love. When love overtakes you. No escape. Just desire to be with the person who make you crazy with desire. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really good i agree with (poetic beauty) enjoy the days you have if it doesnt work there will alwasy be someone better to replace it good write kepp sharing+)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Standing on shaky ground is an earthing place to be. I believe you have to let relationships flow like the ocean tides and keep moving in positive directions. Over thinking and looking too far into the future can destroy the magic. Enjoy the ride and the tidal waves of euphoric pleasure while you have it. DOn't question tomorrow for it isn't set in stone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful work keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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