Golden Desire

dropping down

farther

and further

dressing up

to walk into an empty room

bringing you home

and watching you bloom

with your hands

with your words

with patience wearing thin

while steadily giving in

again

and again

the tide rushing in

to meet your skin

Reviews

[M P Ramesh]

sp,
Its repetition that makes the feelings a shining jewel and when it matters to the creativity the pain undertaken to express the inner course of rhythm makes the writer shattered once its over
yes....the mating so powerful when comes to the more delicate area...
excellent attempt indeed.


carry on.,...........

mp