The fragrance of your smile

The fragrance of your smile

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

Why do you flowerbomb me with your gaze?
your words picked me like a daisy
but now my soul is wilted
seeking redemption in your smile.

Your sweet messages
was a pocket full of white diamonds
conquering the poverty of my heart
exhanging my depressing grey
for lovers' light blue.

Come fragrance me again like before
be my amazing grace,
my delicious delight
and our love will rise, again,
from the ashes.

© 2019 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
I used 5 rather known female fragrances in this poem. See if you can find all of them :) Chances are that some of my words may also be fragrance brands without me even knowing it...;)

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How come I haven't stumbled upon your writing, you should know that you write so well, your poems are so romantically beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Thx Cassie! Guess I prefer to fly under the radar ;) Got too many irons in the fire so I tend to s.. read more
Cassie

1 Year Ago

I know, keeping up with reviews can be difficult as times
SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

I write constantly. But post only a few.....don’t want to spam Writer’s Cafe by posting 50 poem.. read more
It's definitely a clever poem, with some excellent word play! I really liked "flowerbomb me with your gaze."

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much....yeah, that was a difficult one to use.....though easier than Chanel No 5...;)
Beautiful use of words. I liked the feel of joy and possibility in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Tx John....fragrance has a way to inspire and stimulate. I enjoyed writing this one :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You did well and you are welcome my friend.
Look how clever Ardra is, she got five. I wouldn't have got any of those. There is Daisy though. This poem of yours is quite lovely. Reflecting on early love and hoping some of that fragrance can return to a relationship which might not be so sweet smelling. Like the idea. Great stuff.

I like flower bomb very much.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ardra

1 Year Ago

Thank you Chris... ah maybe he meant daisy... I liked the ashes better ( I really have no clue of th.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

You probably did it very well. White Diamonds is a great name for a fragrance Ardra:)
SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

You got daisy, Chris! White Diamonds is arguably the most successful fragrance of all time, possibl.. read more
1)Delicious delight
2) white diamond
3)flower bomb
4) amazing grace
5)ashes

Yaaay heheh got them all
Now gift voucher for buying them....that should be the gift :p


Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Lol 3 out of 5. Not worth any vouchers ;)
1. Flower bomb
2. Daisy
3. White .. read more

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