The fragrance of your smile

Why do you flowerbomb me with your gaze?

your words picked me like a daisy

but now my soul is wilted

seeking redemption in your smile.

Your sweet messages

was a pocket full of white diamonds

conquering the poverty of my heart

exhanging my depressing grey

for lovers' light blue.

Come fragrance me again like before

be my amazing grace,

my delicious delight

and our love will rise, again,

from the ashes.

Author's Note

I used 5 rather known female fragrances in this poem. See if you can find all of them :) Chances are that some of my words may also be fragrance brands without me even knowing it...;)

Reviews

[Cassie]

How come I haven't stumbled upon your writing, you should know that you write so well, your poems are so romantically beautiful.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thx Cassie! Guess I prefer to fly under the radar ;) Got too many irons in the fire so I tend to spend way too little time here....if I could I’d write poems all day long and review 50 a day ;)

[Cassie]

I know, keeping up with reviews can be difficult as times

[SleeplessVolcano]

I write constantly. But post only a few.....don’t want to spam Writer’s Cafe by posting 50 poems at the same time......;)

[Moonie]

It's definitely a clever poem, with some excellent word play! I really liked "flowerbomb me with your gaze."

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much....yeah, that was a difficult one to use.....though easier than Chanel No 5...;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words. I liked the feel of joy and possibility in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx John....fragrance has a way to inspire and stimulate. I enjoyed writing this one :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

Look how clever Ardra is, she got five. I wouldn't have got any of those. There is Daisy though. This poem of yours is quite lovely. Reflecting on early love and hoping some of that fragrance can return to a relationship which might not be so sweet smelling. Like the idea. Great stuff.

I like flower bomb very much.

Chris

[Ardra]

Thank you Chris... ah maybe he meant daisy... I liked the ashes better ( I really have no clue of these...I was trying to decode his poems )

[Chris Shaw]

You probably did it very well. White Diamonds is a great name for a fragrance Ardra:)

[SleeplessVolcano]

You got daisy, Chris! White Diamonds is arguably the most successful fragrance of all time, possibly tied with Chanel Nr 5.

Thanks for taking a stroll through my rose garden ;)

[Ardra]

1)Delicious delight
2) white diamond
3)flower bomb
4) amazing grace
5)ashes

Yaaay heheh got them all
Now gift voucher for buying them....that should be the gift :p

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lol 3 out of 5. Not worth any vouchers ;)
1. Flower bomb
2. Daisy
3. White diamonds
4. Light blue
5. Amazing grace