Boy Across the Road

Just off the top of my head, based after the boy I like...

There was a boy across the street from me

He was just standing there

Being all beautiful

My heart tugged at his shaggy blonde hair

And the soccer ball in his hand

His feet tapping to his earphones

The hole just under the armpit of his shirt

His eyes blue fire

Electric chair with every stare

He walked across the pebbled road

Shadowed by the church on his side of the road

I hid in the corner shadows

Turning my music down to listen to his feet

The were loud getting louder

My breath was hot steamy in the air

I sunk farther in my corner denying existence

The faulty light post displaying tan muscular legs

Why are you following me?

I'm not

        I'm just admiring

He looks away but I can still see the fire

Alluring as hell

At that moment I took off my hood

I've never seen your full face

Why not

           I thought it wasn't worthy

It's nice to look at

Thanks

         So is yours

You don't talk much, do you?

Nope

       But I'd spill out my feelings to you

He moved closer

Some would say too close

but I didn't think so

He could as close as he wanted

You know your face I've been looking at it for a while

Really?

         He had been watching it

Yeah, your eyes are beautiful

Yours are too

                  Mine are an ugly grey

This is boring he smiled

his teeth white as always

It is

I said

He embraced me kissing me hard

His lips were soft

sweet like a pillow

we wrapped around each other

like weeds around a tree

The wall was cold

The ground was hard

I loved every minute of it

Reviews

[Preston Lynch]

hmm... i like it.

[Sloan Chambers]

Ah! Thank you, you got the double lined dialogue! I really tried to make it better than it actually played out... in real life, I just looked at him. Creepy, huh? Haha, there's no creeper intended!

[Alex P.]

Ah, the way every girl's dream scenario plays out with the boy she likes. I enjoyed this very much. I got the sense that, during the 'dialogue' that every double-indented line was her thought, instead of her voice. I like the way you did that. Keep it up =)