Prolouge of Sorrowful Vengance

Prolouge of Sorrowful Vengance

A Chapter by Animefreak12


The forgotten graveyard stood threateningly sinister in the swirling mist. It occupied only one person, a girl, appearing to be only 19. The usual deadly look in her eyes was replaced by something more dismal. She was distressed and heartbroken, something only herself, with all the experiences she’d been through, could feel the most severe.

Kneeling down on her knees as if praying, she lifter her head to see the bold white lettering on the black marble tombstone.


 Valaina Sarah Montgomery


Beloved friend, daughter, and fiancee of Seth

Let your sould find peace


A tear slid down her cheek without her knowledge. That person, that girl damned to the earth forever, was cursed. Cursed in a way unimaginable by humans.



“That person close to you? She was very close to me.” A voice asked behind her. A voice all to familiar. The only person who had that deep, but beautiful voice, was Seth. Her Fiancée.



The girl spun around and met his eyes.



“Oh my god… Valaina!”









© 2009 Animefreak12

Author's Note

I really hope that you like the prolouge!!! Tell me if you want more!!!

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NICE! cant wait to read more. the only thing i seen wrong was the sould i think its suppose to be soul and theres an extra e in fiance. besides that its great. cant wait to read more :)


Posted 10 Years Ago

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Nice! Write more!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow, that was very striking! It hooked me right away, I couldn't wait to read anymore! This piece seemed to grab my attention quickly, so in your next chapters don't slack!

Posted 11 Years Ago

i loved the prologue and i can't wait to read more! for a 12 year old, you definitely have talent and potential, i applaud your creativity, keep it up!:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

i really like this! i love the suspense and the intensity of this! cant wait for more!

Posted 11 Years Ago

i really like it and would love to read more. ahh! the suspense!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ohhh haha, oops! Thanks for that! Im working on Chapter 1 right now and I should be close to finishing tomorow.... Not sure... Glad you liked it!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ooh... Very intense! I want to find out more! Lol. There's only one small thing. You misspelled "lifted". :)
Otherwise, I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on September 1, 2009
Last Updated on September 1, 2009



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Well, to be completely frank, I'm not really the interesting of a person. I write and listen to music to get away from drama in the real world. You'll find I'm extremely in love with Anime, Harry Pot.. more..